Faith

By willowtree

Sat, 19 Jan 2008
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I just wish I hadn't lost my faith
Since you left with yours,
I mean you left - and you had your faith. I don't know whether you had faith in me. I think not. I lost mine when you left.
I lost my faith in you.As per usual I felt insecure. I hardly knew whether I were to see you again- And when I did see you again I had no faith in you . I thought you would leave me again and you did and as the first time I did not know whether you would return. You said I should have faith in you but I did not. Maybe because I had so little faith in myself? I hardly knew what faith was. I was so sceptical. I guess I have lost on the way.

I like praying.I just don't know whether it is the same as having faith in fellow man and woman.
Some have faith in goodness.I do too
Some have faith in love
I do too
Some have faith in God. I do too
Some have faith in me and some have faith in you

I just wish I had listened and learnt what was true
like having faith in me and having faith in you
please forgive me and of course I forgive you.

If I never am to see you again
just know that I have faith

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Submitted by Sooz006 on
This seems a bit contaditory, she spends the entire piece explaining why she doesn't have faith and then in the last line she says that she does. Some great sentiments in here, but the repetition got a bit repetitious. This is good but with another look over it, it could be really good. I like the concept.

 

Submitted by willowtree on
willow thank you for the critique. I do it in repetitions. helps me think along the way and elaborate and develop.Polishing- this I am not good at.It seems difficult alone and with such great sentiments. you forgot the r and c in contradictory.

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Submitted by Sooz006 on
Oh R's and C' are well overused anyway, my little donation to saving the planet :-) I hate going back over stuff too.