Intermittent Recall
By Wolfsax
Fri, 18 Mar 2011
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Intermittent Recall.
I see you float,
oh blessed isle of bliss
far from these mist strewn shores
where I now dwell.
I see you clear
as clouds disperse,
I bask in sunlight’s warming glow
that brings a blessed balm.
My vision fades
as nightfall looms
and gloom is gathered all around
until a new day dawns.
I see you now no more
for night expands as day declines
and dark devours all
eternally.
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You have quite a way with
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
You have quite a way with words, Dave. A gentle feel indeed, to this, which I enjoyed, very much;-)
Tina
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I agree with Tina, this has
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I agree with Tina, this has a gentle feel with an
air of mystery to it.
A beautiful read.
Jenny.
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new Claireslover Very warm
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new Claireslover
Very warm welcome to AbcTales.
Enjoyed this,you aim for the stars.
Stanza I like:
I see you clear
as clouds disperse
I bask in sunlight's warming glow
that brings a blessed balm
Lovely
julie
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