VANTAGE POINT
By YaseminB
Sun, 12 Nov 2017
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VANTAGE POINT
The queue curls; Serpentine. Crimson faces A woman exhales! The last breath of her cigarette. Takes her place: at the tail end. Thin silhouette, vital teeth missing! We remain at the vantage point; watching. Food bank: a new entry In our dictionary. A kindly man hands over green apples, a loaf of bread And a tin of soup; indistinct! To the mouth of the serpent: An adolescent mother With her babe in pushchair. I usher my babes away; Eyes moist! Yasemin Balandi
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Fortunate not to be in th
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
Fortunate not to be in th queue. Some clever touches here.
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really
liked this one YaseminB kind of gritty and sensitive.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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