Sands of Time
By Yin vs Yang
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Sand, golden sand, flowing through my hand, like time that escapes us all.
We used to play here.
Content, as the day came to an end.
In Grannie's backyard we'd sit watching the sunset as the shadows grew tall.
In Gran's garden, such spacious ground, what mysteries were to be found.
We did not know.
But with gun in hand to a faraway land we pursued to conquer foe.
We were the heroes,
"bang, bang, you're dead"
But no wound would show, no blood would flow,
and the villains never died only came back for more.
It was no longer a gentle garden, with beautiful butterfly.
It was a Jungle!
Thick with trees, green upon green,
with villain and murderer unseen.
Except to you and me,
who defied fear, saved the world,
and got home in time for tea.
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A lovely, gently reflective
A lovely, gently reflective poem with a rhythm to match. Welcome to ABCtales - hope you post more soon
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I loved this too, it's
I loved this too, it's beautiful, has the contented full feeling of the end of a day playing outdoors in the sun. I liked the way you link the sand of your Grandmother's garden to time passing too, you grown older, remembering. It is perfect
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You capture the children's
You capture the children's imagination playing, and I love the last line! Reminds me of my daughter writing some story, and there always had to be detail of each meal! Rhiannon
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Beautiful write capturing the
Beautiful write capturing the fun and innocence of childhood,
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