The patient owl
By Yutka
Wed, 24 Nov 2010
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The moon lazily emerges ambling the skies,
when birds are still one with the night
nesting in black filigree treetops, hidden
from the preying owl, who by now is fully awake,
mesmerized by moonlight that mirrors in her eyes.
Sitting and waiting, the horizon pulls her awareness.
Dawn, night in reverse, pulsates flashes of green
over the distant ocean, dyes
the skyline yellow between night and day.
Still night has the upper hand, gives it life
with little mice, lets them scurry
up the trees, towards the lazy moon,
past the patient owl hungry for spirit and flesh.
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There's something really
There's something really nice about this. I like it.
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What an amazing poem, such
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What an amazing poem, such beautiful words to describe that moment between day and night.
Thankyou for a beautiful read.
Jenny.
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I came to this poem through
I came to this poem through reading AKT's recently posted and superb poem. Yukta, I loved reading this not least because it is similar to one I posted recently, it's fantastic to see some similar emphasis and imagery shared between our two efforts. :-)). A lovely poem yukta, I love the reflected moon and the image of the mice climbing the tree - superb!
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