The power of water

Cherry

By Yutka

Wed, 31 Jul 2024
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In the cradle of waves,  

we emerged,  

eighty percent liquid,  

a dance of molecules,  

a consciousness of water,  

flowing through our veins,  

echoing the ancient tides.

 

Tears,  

sacred droplets,  

washing the dead,  

purifying sorrow,  

a quiet baptism of grief,  

as spring waters,  

feminine and nurturing,  

rise from the earth's embrace,  

mineral whispers,  

telling tales of resilience.

 

Yet rain,  

masculine force,  

can rage unchecked,  

if love’s energy is bound,  

it carves valleys of despair,  

destruction in its wake,  

a tempest of unspent longing.

 

In every droplet,  

the interconnectedness blooms,  

beauty revealed,  

crystals reflecting intention,  

good or bad,  

we shape the waters,  

and the waters shape us,  

a sacred cycle,  

the pulse of existence.

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Your poem evokes the boundless connection we have with water, with the beauty, and also the harshness, from the moment we're conceived.

I like the lines:- 

Crystals reflecting intention,

good or bad,

we shape the waters,

and the waters shape us,

a sacred cycle,

the pulse of existence.

Those lines are full of wisdom.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Yutka on

Thanks Jenny! Are you familiar with EMOTO, a man who thoroughly tested water and researched prompted water crystals' ability to change with emotions ....fascinating!

Yutka 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

That's very interesting and no I've never heard of this. Thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Beautiful. 

 

Submitted by Turlough on

feminine and nurturing

masculine force

good or bad

 

Birth or death... so many contrasting features but water is always part of us.

I love how your words emphasise the extent to which our world and our lives are dependent on this thing that we so often take for granted..

 

 

Turlough

Submitted by Yutka on

Thank you for that! Water is the elixir of life, without it we would not be here. It is fascinating to think of all its power. School children should be taught about it from early on.