She’d been active in previous weeks. It had become a kind of ritual; when the sun began its fiery descent, she knew it was time to get ready. Active...
Six foot eight. Two hundred pounds in weight. That’s the first image that came to folks' minds when Big John’s name was spoken. No longer were giants...
The sun was a rustic orb lowering itself beneath the distant peaks. As if fleeting. Or hiding. Unable to watch from above the horror unfolding across...
Her younger brother had just recently learned to walk. As she held his hand down the villages’ main street, people stopped to comment on the apparent...
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Posted on Fri, 29 Sep 2023
Thanks for reading til the end, and for your feedback! I'm definitely considering assembling a novel-length story out of this. This was my first piece that was in any way 'long', at least longer than 1k/2k words. I'm going to lay out a plot for a...
Thanks for reading til the
Posted on Fri, 29 Sep 2023
Thanks for reading til the end, and for your feedback! I'm definitely considering assembling a novel-length story out of this. This was my first piece that was in any way 'long', at least longer than 1k/2k words. I'm going to lay out a plot for a...
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