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Your great use of
Posted on Sat, 02 Sep 2023
Your great use of onomatopoeiae makes the description of dramatic weather all the more dramatic.
And you sneaked in before me with my idea for writing, though I didn't really know where to start. It seems like here my onomatopoeiae have...
Read full commentPosted in The sounds of rain
Knowing that, Coral, cements
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023
Knowing that, Coral, cements it in my heart and my head forever. Tx
Read full commentPosted in You Never Said
A wonderful poem for making
Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023
A wonderful poem for making me think seriously about so many things.
But also this bit...
Grandfather says,
see how I can take out my teeth
and pop them back in again,
has made me,...
Read full commentPosted in The First Sorrow
Ah, now I've got it. There's
Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023
Ah, now I've got it. There's really nothing to translate.
This is very clever. I don't know much about Latin but Google Translate does seem to recognise the words as being written in Latin.
What a wonderful discovery.
Read full commentPosted in A riddle?
It''s incredible how vets can
Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023
It''s incredible how vets can turn up unexpectedly when needed. Do they really go everywhere with a termometer and a small animal cage?
A great poem dear Jenny the lifesaver.
Read full commentPosted in Feathers Without Hope
Oh, Niamh, I thought you
Posted on Tue, 29 Aug 2023
Oh, Niamh, I thought you might be. It's good that you can write about it. If it helps, don't stop.
Read full commentPosted in 'Painkiller'
There are so many conflicting
Posted on Tue, 29 Aug 2023
There are so many conflicting opinions and methods of treatment within the world of mental health. It seems like some of the most vulnerable people can become guinea pigs.
Julie's story is a very sad one made worse by the standard of some...
Read full commentPosted in 'Painkiller'
The simplest moments can
Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023
The simplest moments can often be the most precious.
A lovely memory indeed.
Read full commentPosted in a morning to remember
The same happened to us once.
Posted on Tue, 29 Aug 2023
The same happened to us once. A big brown cow eating our lovely flowers. Our five week old kitten was at the kitchen window screaming the place down as he tried to get out to kill the beast. The woman who owned the cow gave us a right telling off...
Read full commentPosted in Jasus
I must admit I had never
Posted on Mon, 28 Aug 2023
I must admit I had never heard of the woman until now. But I did a bit of Googling, and ... fascinating!
So I watched a YouTube clip about her life. It fits perfectly with the words of your poem. They have done a good job!
Posted in Miller
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