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I had not heard of black
Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2019
I had not heard of black herons, but your wonderful poem makes me want to know all about them! So many lines stand out
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"the tall decay of sunflowers
Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019
"the tall decay of sunflowers
- Whose?"
I like this, allotments have so much of a person's life poured in, the dead stalks are like gravestones for the time in summer past
"swirl and deadly swell" brilliant alliteration...
Read full commentPosted in Prevarication Saturday
bleak and strong. I like how
Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2019
bleak and strong. I like how there is no blame, what has happened is compared to weather, it just happens. And I like that the last word is "thaw"
Interred flames of spent desires
Nothing can live here now
although the poem...
Read full commentPosted in It feels like winter here
I love the slow majestic
Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019
I love the slow majestic sweep of these lines :
the deep blue cruise
of an underwater colossus.
and these, you have expressed how I felt as a child seeing the one at the Natural History Museum. This is brilliant,...
Read full commentPosted in Whale bones
Oh I love this story :0)
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
Oh I love this story :0)
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 9
I love these rhymes! It flows
Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019
I love these rhymes! It flows so well, the line endings are so smooth? It's what I am always aiming for when attempting to do rhyming and don't achieve :0)
Do you always remember the seed of writing, when you read it years later? It seems...
Read full commentPosted in That’s where I was when I wrote it down …!
Witloof! My Dad used to grow
Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2019
Witloof! My Dad used to grow that in a cupboard. It would be all pale, like something Gollum might eat if he went veggie. I hope you are bringing the chestnuts home? Or is it too prickly for your dog? Mine used to get sore paws trying to see what...
Read full commentPosted in This October Brings Endings
Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019
Jaunty rhythm and custard coming at the end as if plonked on the table infront of an eager child, spoon at the ready
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 11)
This is gorgeous, and coming
Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019
This is gorgeous, and coming after the last piece, inside and outside, remembering when you were free. I particilarly liked the turning off the tape to listen to the reeds. Filling your head with space before going back, like a diver takes a...
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You have conjured the mystery
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2019
You have conjured the mystery and aloneness of hares very well, particularly liked
"until we were just secrets
of the field and heather."
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