Hares
By onemorething
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Their black dipped ears
flinched and twisted, tuned
to curse and threat,
still we were seized
by these frantic wishes of hares -
their twilight trysts and lunar violence
- though I have never coveted
this kind of madness.
There was no need for mystics
when spring was over,
no enquiry to be made
of purple entrails.
Love is its own insanity;
ours heralded jealous rituals
and embittered contests,
we, boxers bloodied in the ring
until we were just secrets
of the field and heather.
And hopeless then,
we became dusk dwellers
who awaited the arrival of stars
as though they might deign
to share their brightness.
Image from pixabay.
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Comments
Skilfully done, dark
Skilfully done, dark psychological dynamics, liked 'lunar violence' and 'until we were just secrets of the field and heather'. Great work
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Hares live in such a fragile
Hares live in such a fragile different world to us, I think you've incredible insight into these creatures in your poem, showing not only their courage, but also their acceptance for failure.
Jenny.
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You have conjured the mystery
You have conjured the mystery and aloneness of hares very well, particularly liked
"until we were just secrets
of the field and heather."
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Hi again Onemore
Hi again Onemore
I'm not a poet, and couldn't possibly write something as emotional as this.
Well done.
Jean
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