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Ok. So, I like what happens within the story. Getting up to the window is too long. He needs to land on his arse quicker. So I'd cut some there. The monologue about his woes is too long. The speech back and forth between them is excellent. I'd...
It's a pleasure. I enjoyed it
Posted on Mon, 07 Jun 2021
It's a pleasure. I enjoyed it. And seeing all the lovely feedback you've had. I loved the picture too.
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Congratulations. This is our
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Congratulations. This is our Facebook And Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share.
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A nice description of what
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A nice description of what the whole exam ordeal feels like
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Very moving. Great Pick of
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Very moving. Great Pick of the Day.
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I hate robins. They are evil
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I hate robins. They are evil little dictators. So I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
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Nice ending.
Posted on Fri, 02 Apr 2021
Nice ending.
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I never knew him and now I
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I never knew him and now I miss him.
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It feels full of hope! Love
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It feels full of hope! Love it.
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Ok. So, I like what happens
Posted on Fri, 05 Mar 2021
Ok. So, I like what happens within the story. Getting up to the window is too long. He needs to land on his arse quicker. So I'd cut some there. The monologue about his woes is too long. The speech back and forth between them is excellent. I'd...
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I love its simplicity, that
Posted on Mon, 01 Mar 2021
I love its simplicity, that of a single moment. But it's so moving.
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