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| Collection | A Requiem For One Man's Life | marandina | 0 | 11 years 5 months ago |
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| Story | Private Heaven | marandina | 0 | 11 years 6 months ago |
| Forum topic | crop circles juliet oc | josiedog | 4 | 18 years 10 months ago |
| Forum topic | At the going down of the sun. | QueenElf | 3 | 18 years 10 months ago |
| Forum topic | Down And Out In The Jobcentre by QueenElf | tara_hanks | 11 | 18 years 10 months ago |
| Forum topic | Chinese Whispers by marandina | tcook | 4 | 18 years 11 months ago |
*I am grateful to other folks
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020
*I am grateful to other folks who also gave me very detailed comments including airyfairy
Read full commentPosted in Empire State (Part Three) - The Devil in Tintagel
Cheers Drew. It was your
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020
Cheers Drew. It was your feedback that pushed me to think bigger. Thanks for the inspiration to aim higher. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Empire State (Part Three) - The Devil in Tintagel
I wish I flowed with prose
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2020
I wish I flowed with prose like that. So fluent, so rhythmic
Read full commentPosted in Aware Of Letting Go
Oh yes - Barnstaple it is. I
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020
Oh yes - Barnstaple it is. I've been there a few times as well. Thanks for spotting that and duly edited. There is a Barnstable in the US which would throw the geography out a tad! Yes, there is a part 2 at...
Read full commentPosted in Empire State (Part Three) - The Devil in Tintagel
Ah. Not so good. On that word
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020
Ah. Not so good. On that word pivots the emotion of this poem. Moving and now even more personal. Paul
Read full commentPosted in The Visitable Past
You see so much in nature
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020
You see so much in nature that translates to your poems. You must enjoy pondering, drawing inspiration from what you see.
Read full commentPosted in Locard’s Exchange Principle
Gotcha
Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2020
Gotcha. Super poem, of course. Very topical just now. The world awaits...with baited breath.
Read full commentPosted in Pataphor
Time
Posted on Mon, 02 Nov 2020
Time is indeed malleable. Haunting reflection of the beauty of nature
Read full commentPosted in Screech
Crinoline figures
Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2020
"Crinoline figures hovering" I'm not sure what these are but I like it!
Read full commentPosted in Shadows Of The Past
Goblins
Posted on Thu, 29 Oct 2020
Those goblins like to make merry, don't they? Carefree prose and an entertaining read.
Read full commentPosted in Behold The Faerie Realm Part Four
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