'The White Orchid' was a popular club, a bit of a dive in truth, but here you could pick up plenty of pretty girls, all at a price. Lily-Rose, Yvette...
I hear the pitter-pattering of the rain, And see pellucid drops falling like pearls. And in the distance a roseate suffusion Is behind verdant, green...
I don't think many conkers become trees. I remember hoardes of boys throwing up sticks to try and make them fall much to the consternation of neighbours. Nice poem : rich !
I loved the description of the imps, with their red torsos, furry legs and cloven hooves. This shadow king seems sinister; I want to know how it all turns out. Fascinating !
hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 11 Oct 2022
hi Rhiannon,
This did indeed have a musical flow to the correlating change of the seasons, a never ending cycle. Very nicely done !!!
hilary
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Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
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Poor farmer is all I can say. Enjoyed this longer tale, Paul. Fantasy seems to suit your creative gift !!!
hilary
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Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
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Sounds like a car crash of a car. Hope you are safe !!!
hilary
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Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
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The narrative is progressing nicely : some wonderful, descriptive writing. Waiting for the final curtain !!!
hilary
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Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
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I just loved the passage in italics; it was beautiful prose. Look forward to seeing it through !
hilary
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hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
hi Rhiannon,
I don't think many conkers become trees. I remember hoardes of boys throwing up sticks to try and make them fall much to the consternation of neighbours. Nice poem : rich !
hilary
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Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
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I liked this poem. Some interesting use of language. It works !
hilary
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Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022
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I like it too, Sean: short and sweet !
hilary
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Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
I enjoyed the fruitiness of this, some engaging rhymes too. An enjoyable read !
hilary
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Hi marandina.
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Hi marandina.
I loved the description of the imps, with their red torsos, furry legs and cloven hooves. This shadow king seems sinister; I want to know how it all turns out. Fascinating !
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