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Shoelaces
The way he told me, he saw it as a kind of existentialist episode. “It’s like the left side of my brain’s taken over from the right side” he said, “… the sensible side.
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Goldilocks and the Three Bears (Inspiration Point)
Once upon a time, not so long ago, Goldilocks went for a walk in the woods, but no sooner had she got there than she realized she was wearing six inch heels.
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Las Vegas 3
“So what would happen if we didn’t give it back? If we just kept going?
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Las Vegas 2
It’s half past eight in the evening, but it’s still boiling hot. The temperature gauge says it’s 110, so the first thing we do is put the roof down.
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Las Vegas
We’ve finished laughing at the room. We’ve examined the funny fake ancient Egyptian hieroglyphs that they’ve plastered everywhere.
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A brilliant contribution -
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026
A brilliant contribution - thank you very much Soulfire!
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 7
Brilliant, thank you Turlough
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026
Brilliant, thank you Turlough. I think you've quite comprehensively fleshed out the characters for us now!
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This is what Google tells me,
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2026
This is what Google tells me, and I'm not 100% sure your suggestion fits into it because it couldn't be described as giving the 'general' idea - it seems more specific - sorry!:
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I've never seen Falling Down
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2026
I've never seen Falling Down and had to google a couple of US specific things (fire lanes, blotter item), but I also liked the voice here with its forensic level of attention to detail.
One question: in the first part you mention that he...
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I thought perhaps she'd been
Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2026
I thought perhaps she'd been travelling with her security and he'd had the car wait in case they missed the train?
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I note the phrase 'crazy cat
Posted on Sun, 08 Feb 2026
I note the phrase 'crazy cat lady' has stayed long after the cats left - didn't realise it was set in the future until she went to the library. Cats gone, patriarchy still present and correct : )
I really enjoyed this story - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in The Lady on Sycamore Lane (3)
This wonderful response to
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2026
This wonderful response to our new Inspiration Point is our social media Pick of the Day
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Thank you very much for your
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2026
Thank you very much for your summing up of two weeks in Bulgaria Turlough and the new word. Not unalive sadly - I knew that one - but philtrum - never knew it had a name!
I did wonder where you'd vanished to. Hopefully your machine is back...
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I really enjoyed both the
Posted on Mon, 01 Dec 2025
I really enjoyed both the comments and the first half of November, so thank you very much!
I still have hedgehogs in my garden luckily, and feed them every night, even through winter as they often don't completely hibernate. Other reasons...
Read full commentPosted in Papa’s Got a Brand New Chainsaw
All as readable as the first
Posted on Fri, 21 Nov 2025
All as readable as the first part well done
If you're looking for suggestions (if not please ignore) - I can see you're making it clear that neither one has the intention of taking it further than friendship (at first) but quite early on...
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