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I have 182 stories published in
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My stories have been read 176420 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
12 of my 332 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 12 votes
Adam Large
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Pudding Detective - Chapter 2 - Catch me if you can
Think about this for a moment. If you were making the yummiest cake in the world, one that would blow away all your taste buds you ever had, what would be the ingredient you just had to include...
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summer
It's as if the past had never been...
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Spring
The weight is over, glass half full upon us, for spring is here...
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Just sublime. I can reach out
Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022
Just sublime. I can reach out and feel the delicacy of every word, fragile yet strong.
'soft as forgetting' - wonderful!
Read full commentPosted in butterfly moment
I enjoyed this poem. I liked
Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021
I enjoyed this poem. I liked the way it got more frenzied as it went on, unfortunately a bit like the addiction itself.
If the money each week is saved, after ten years you've got yourself over a grand. That's not a bad win!
Read full commentPosted in Being Careful What You Wish For
Really captured the scene
Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2020
Really captured the scene well, like some niftily produced video footage.
I particularly enjoyed verse 3.
Read full commentPosted in Peace In The Forest
This is wonderful. So
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
This is wonderful. So evocative, with some lovely details - too many to pick and highlight.
A real transporter. I completely felt like I was there waiting for the saveloys to arrive, the smell driving me insane after a hard day's graft. I...
Read full commentPosted in The Pub
I enjoyed how this overflowed
Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019
I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in The End of a Brighter November Day
Very well written. You have
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
Some parts of us are sacred
Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018
Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.
Read full commentPosted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)
I'll be honest with you. My
Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017
I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...
Read full commentPosted in The agony and the ecstacy
Thanks for the pick, that's
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017
Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?
Read full commentPosted in Traces
Well deserved. A really
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017
Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity.
Read full commentPosted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.
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