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2215 of my comments have received 2262 Great Feedback votes

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an interesting storyline in

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

an interesting storyline in this piece Teddy. Might be worth expanding?

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Posted in Clarence Ramone

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Hello L.C. and welcome to ABC

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

Hello L.C. and welcome to ABC. In answer to your question, this is engaging enough to make me want to read chapter two. A few typos and odd word choices here and there which, if you go through it again and correct (perhaps get a friend to read it...

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a nicely written children's

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015

a nicely written children's story

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Posted in Dog

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Hello Ty and welcome to

Posted on Mon, 21 Sep 2015

Hello Ty and welcome to ABCTales. This is a nice dreamy narrative. You might like to put it into paragraphs to encourage reads and comments,as  big blocks of text can be a bit hard on the eye!

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Posted in Your Hand In Mine

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this is both universal and

Posted on Sat, 29 Aug 2015

this is both universal and very personal and I'm so sorry you're going through this. If you could bear it, it might well help other people if you could publish it to a wider audience. Congratulations on your degree

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Posted in Bluesville

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Hello WS and welcome to ABC.

Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2015

Hello WS and welcome to ABC. I think you might have been cut off at the end by our word limit? Perhaps you could post this in two parts?

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Posted in Cooking for Therapists

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Much better as a two-parter!

Posted on Tue, 11 Aug 2015

Much better as a two-parter!

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Posted in Whistle on the wynd part 2

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Very nicely paced, and I like

Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2015

Very nicely paced, and I like the interweaving of the relationship issues with the main plot. I think it needs a through going through for simple things that could do with being fixed (you say he has epilepsy, then you say he has an unrecognised...

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how beautiful this is! I wish

Posted on Tue, 04 Aug 2015

how beautiful this is! I wish you'd post more often..

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Posted in Elephant Song

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I enjoyed this - thank you!

Posted on Wed, 29 Jul 2015

I enjoyed this - thank you!

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