love the rhythm and rhyme of this poem, and totally agree with Di in her comment. We can all learn so much from writing on subjects...it appealed to the child inside me.
This was such a touching story Paul. So relevant too. The hardest part is learning to carry on after loosing a loved one, having your world turned upside down is never easy to cope with. I myself have lost so many loved ones to cancer, it gets...
Willow sure has a lot of magical powers, such a bright cat deserves to win. A bit of magic certainly goes a long way. Would have loved to have seen the expression on the uniformed man's face when he looked in the carrier to find...
Embracing the spirit of your poem, gave a sense of movement, these birds relocating constantly, just like the clouds. Your passion for this bird shines through in your words.
I wish some Arab billionaire would buy up every part of the rain forest and order that it never be poached or chopped down, I know I would if I had an endless pot of money. You wisely describe how we're loosing so much to money and greed that's...
You took me down to the sea with this poem Rhiannon, it's so long since I've been. Summing up the view from the cottage in that lovely painting. Enjoyable read.
You really made my day with
Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021
You really made my day with this part Phil, I laughed out loud it was so funny, ...
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021
Hi Rhiannon,
love the rhythm and rhyme of this poem, and totally agree with Di in her comment. We can all learn so much from writing on subjects...it appealed to the child inside me.
Jenny.
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This was such a touching
Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021
This was such a touching story Paul. So relevant too. The hardest part is learning to carry on after loosing a loved one, having your world turned upside down is never easy to cope with. I myself have lost so many loved ones to cancer, it gets...
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 12 Sep 2021
Hi Penny,
Willow sure has a lot of magical powers, such a bright cat deserves to win. A bit of magic certainly goes a long way. Would have loved to have seen the expression on the uniformed man's face when he looked in the carrier to find...
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Embracing the spirit of your
Posted on Fri, 06 Aug 2021
Embracing the spirit of your poem, gave a sense of movement, these birds relocating constantly, just like the clouds. Your passion for this bird shines through in your words.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
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I'm so enjoying your story
Posted on Thu, 27 May 2021
I'm so enjoying your story and the story line is perfect.
Jenny.
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So the mystery thickens and
Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021
So the mystery thickens and leaves me wondering!
Still enjoying and looking forward to next part.
Jenny.
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I wish some Arab billionaire
Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021
I wish some Arab billionaire would buy up every part of the rain forest and order that it never be poached or chopped down, I know I would if I had an endless pot of money. You wisely describe how we're loosing so much to money and greed that's...
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You took me down to the sea
Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021
You took me down to the sea with this poem Rhiannon, it's so long since I've been. Summing up the view from the cottage in that lovely painting. Enjoyable read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Coastal Cottage (Pembrokeshire)
Such a sensitive poem is so
Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021
Such a sensitive poem is so moving and speaks of your love for your daughter. I too am so sorry for your loss.
Jenny.
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