“Will you marry me?” He’s adorable. He’s so earnest. He goes all out, he’ll be kneeling there in front of me with the ring poking out of its velvet-...
We live beneath a citrine sky, Until it washes purple, Then aqua, Until a deep black canvas studs itself with jewels, Until a sunrise detonates, And...
I went out to try to find myself. And I found myself, two storeys up, in a compact, one-bedroom flat, overlooking the sea. # But to begin: I suppose...
I like this. Took me a couple of paragraphs to catch on to the fact that the story is being told from the antique's point-of-view. I think the antique (and the sparing detail about exactly what it is added to the story) definitely has a 'voice...
Nice portrait. The character
Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017
Nice portrait. The character comes alive in a poem that feels as if it's about more than it says 'out loud'.
Read full commentPosted in Heels
cute, quirky fan fiction.
Posted on Sat, 10 Jun 2017
cute, quirky fan fiction. Loved it :)
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I like this. Took me a
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016
I like this. Took me a couple of paragraphs to catch on to the fact that the story is being told from the antique's point-of-view. I think the antique (and the sparing detail about exactly what it is added to the story) definitely has a 'voice...
Read full commentPosted in Cornucopia
Not that hard it seems :) I
Posted on Thu, 03 Mar 2016
Not that hard it seems :) I like this, it provokes an emotional reaction with a nice economy of words. Welcome aboard.
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Oh, wait: Plum! (from "thumP
Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2015
Oh, wait: Plum! (from "thumP LUMps") Nicely done :)
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