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"The Coffee House Spy" 3

Emily locked her bedroom door, threw off her stained clothes and grabbed a pair of jeans and a yellow cotton top from her closet as she questioned...
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Cherry

"The Coffee House Spy" 2

Emily walked Sir Harry up the five flights of stairs to her tiny one bedroom apartment while thinking unkind thoughts about the dog’s inconsiderate...
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Cherry

"The Coffee House Spy"

Her favorite coffee shop was crowded with the morning rush of fellow caffeine addicts and Emily wasn’t in the mood to wait in the twenty person deep...
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A dark and shivering poem; I

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

A dark and shivering poem; I loved it!...all things spooky and otherwordly, perfect for Halloween. I love this holiday; thoughts of the unknown and hope those we love are not lost to us, plus all the decorations and spooky good fun. And now I'm...

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Posted in All Hallows Eve

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A spectral and morose walk

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

A spectral and morose walk through a graveyard; you’ve captured the essence of Samhain Jenny. The thin veil between life and afterlife is threaded throughout your Poe like poem ; and so apropos to the Season; well done.

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Posted in Cause To Be Heard on Samhain's Eve

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Chilling and so well

Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022

Chilling and so well structured. No one else saw the girl that befriended Jenny or addressed her. The way you had Jenny walk backwards through the events to get to her conclusion made it a well thought out ending. Another great story Paul.

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Posted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)

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Interesting snapshots into a

Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2022

Interesting snapshots into a life. smiley

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Posted in Here

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Great story telling and your

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Great story telling and your conclusion did not disappoint. This was a perfect October tale but you do have elements here that allow for a longer fantasy novel. 'The Williams Family Saga' might be something to consider. I know I would want to...

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)

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Could a lawyer have helped

Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022

Could a lawyer have helped speed up that process? But I'm not sure what that would cost either. So sorry there are such rotten, greedy landlords out there;  I hope you eventually get back your son's money for him and all the other expenses too.

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Beautiful words to bring to

Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022

Beautiful words to bring to mind a perfect moon lit night.smiley

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Posted in the magical music of moonlight

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Darkness vs. the light; the

Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022

Darkness vs. the light; the light prevailed for now but you've left it precariously teetering on a flying carpet...I cannot wait for the final chapter; your writing is suspenseful and superb, and I'm sure the ending will be equally excellent...I...

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)

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Ah, the boy is a waizard in a

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022

Ah, the boy is a wizard in a family of wizards...this story is taking shape nicely; I see I have one more to go and then will have to wait on the conclusion...

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Four of Six)

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Father Time, abstract and

Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022

Father Time, abstract and watching ....great writing. This story is just getting better and better and I can not wait to read it through; which I'm going to do right now!

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Three of Six)

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