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"Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)

By Penny4athought on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

So, we drink your potion and tell the truth?” “Exactly,” Perfidia stated placing the two potion laced tea cups on the table. Jon picked up one cup...

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"Willow's Tail" 31 ( Conclusions Part 1 of 2)

By Penny4athought on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

Willow strolled over to Perfidia but couldn’t contain her cat laugh. “Yeah, I know my plan backfired and you think its funny but I need you to fix...

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"Willow's Tail" 30 ( narrowing down the suspects)

By Penny4athought on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

“I’m glad you’re willing to talk to me,” Jon said as he placed the teacups on the table. “I wouldn’t say willing; it’s more like compelled,” Perfidia...

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Willow's Tail" 29 (gather the suspects)

By Penny4athought on Fri, 03 Jun 2022

The festival’s closing ritual had begun, the reception hall was lit with twinkling fairy lights and a banner strung across its impressive façade...

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I have to tell you I'm truly

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022

I have to tell you I'm truly enjoying this story and I love it when I see another chapter posted. The characters are likable and believable, I am curious to know what the mother's reasons for leaving her children could be so I'm impatiently...

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 6

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So now we have the

Posted on Sun, 30 Oct 2022

So now we have the perspective from the older brother, adding layers to your story. I am curious to know where the mother has gone to and why she left her children to fend for them self. And how could she leave a four year old? That begs so many...

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 2

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Great start; it's a well

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

Great start; it's a well structured and believable story, sad and realistic. Now I want to read the next chapter and see how they manage to keep the secret, and make ends meet.

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 1

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What an imagination you have

Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022

What an imagination you have Di-hard; this reads like Alice in wonderland. Strange goings on for Mary, Wong and a Quartermaster. I loved the surreal quality of the world you've created; it's like a Picasso in words.

Posted in part 15

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A dark and shivering poem; I

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

A dark and shivering poem; I loved it!...all things spooky and otherwordly, perfect for Halloween. I love this holiday; thoughts of the unknown and hope those we love are not lost to us, plus all the decorations and spooky good fun. And now I'm...

Posted in All Hallows Eve

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A spectral and morose walk

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

A spectral and morose walk through a graveyard; you’ve captured the essence of Samhain Jenny. The thin veil between life and afterlife is threaded throughout your Poe like poem ; and so apropos to the Season; well done.

Posted in Cause To Be Heard on Samhain's Eve

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Chilling and so well

Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022

Chilling and so well structured. No one else saw the girl that befriended Jenny or addressed her. The way you had Jenny walk backwards through the events to get to her conclusion made it a well thought out ending. Another great story Paul.

Posted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)

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Interesting snapshots into a

Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2022

Interesting snapshots into a life.

Posted in Here

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Great story telling and your

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Great story telling and your conclusion did not disappoint. This was a perfect October tale but you do have elements here that allow for a longer fantasy novel. 'The Williams Family Saga' might be something to consider. I know I would want to...

Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)

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Could a lawyer have helped

Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022

Could a lawyer have helped speed up that process? But I'm not sure what that would cost either. So sorry there are such rotten, greedy landlords out there; I hope you eventually get back your son's money for him and all the other expenses too.