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I have 1156 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2169400 times and 1170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Pick Up

Almost home. Angel hurried up in the hill at Byron Street, pulling her coat tighter around her flowery Boots' blouse, the high winds catching in her...
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what comes after Christmas.

Carl sucked on his teeth but didn’t say anything when the camper van parked in their street. The neighbours would squabble about it soon enough...
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silent as need be

Rain battered down. A give-and-take. They walked side-by-side, silent as need be. They crossed Kilbowie Road, watching for traffic, listening for the...
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Awake

Almost the worst thing A face that no longer speaks Warfarin and medical wattle One that makes you weep Sloshing around is somebody No need for an...
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claptrap

Collecting a plastic medal on his 30 th anniversary. Clenched teeth and a rictus smile. The backslapping goodness of them all. Dry lips. Missing God...
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1566 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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Yes, she really was saintly

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

Yes, she really was saintly and human too. 

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Posted in Remembering Corrie ten Boom

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the moron's moron is German,

Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024

the moron's moron is German, obviously. His mother was a wee Free. Obviously too free to have a narcisstic psychopath rapist embezzeler (I might have missed a few, add  your own) for a son. We don't count population that way. We include midges,...

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Posted in Too Many Tabs Open

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I suppose we all end up with

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

I suppose we all end up with a woman (or man) we've only know a short while. I guess we'll fall back on they were a different generation. We're a different generation too. Perhaps if we write it down that'll help?

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Posted in Muscle memory

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I shaved my dad before he

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

I shaved my dad before he died. Lived with him and worked with him. Never knew him. The strange thing is my sisters say I'm the dead spit of him. hmmmm. 

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Posted in Muscle memory

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The next BBC Open Call

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

The next BBC Open Call submission window will be open between 12 noon on Tuesday 7th November 2023 and 12 noon on Tuesday 5th December 2023.

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 6

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ah words sometimes fall short

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2023

ah words sometimes fall short, but you have risen to the challenge of raising the dead to something like remembrance. 

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Posted in Mother-tongue

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I hope we're swinging  back

Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023

I hope we're swinging  back into the light. Maybe not yet, Maybe not ever. But the hope sings in your poem. 

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Posted in "Murky Waters"

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I guess we all see worthless

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2023

I guess we all see worthless coins sometimes. but to trade them for words and poetry is to create a new currency. 

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Posted in The thought of it

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death has a way or reminding

Posted on Fri, 27 Jan 2023

death has a way or reminding us not to eat sweaty cheese. 

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Posted in end of the pier

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it's a dog's life, but

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

it's a dog's life, but sometimes it isn't. The transmigration of the soul takes many forms (so we're told). Why not a dog? Or a cat? Or a Tory? Too far, sorry. 

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Posted in The Last Wish of Christmas

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