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I have 1175 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2383460 times and 1197 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1624 of my 15,417 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1658 votes

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tears were not enough

After the funeral, Davy nursed a lukewarm can of Skol lager and chose a quiet, empty corner of the church hall near the swing of the door and stink...

I remember her now

A guitar shaped body Jutting hips that hook a look Pubic hair and yearning – Desire singes and drowns shyness Unbuttons her blouse Plucks the straps...
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IQ test 3

Somebody had flung a scratchy blanket over my body to bury the unwashed. I woke up to the stench of my own body bathed in sweat. Eyes plumped by lack...
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A refugee

Your life laid bare The sudden intimacy of violence Blood in the air Fully exposed. They place their faith Your lips, your tits, your cunt You squat...
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Ernie at the edge of the world

Ernie left his flat on the eight floor of Dunswin Court at around three o’clock in the morning. He’s got two bedrooms, but only uses one to live in...

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1624 of my comments have received 1658 Great Feedback votes

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the centre cannot hold

Posted on Sat, 13 Oct 2018

the centre cannot hold

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Posted in Here the Gyres rest

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a cat has more than nine

Posted on Thu, 11 Oct 2018

a cat has more than nine lives. I'm glad you're counting. 

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Posted in Moses, The Spider Slayer!

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Biggest Elvis, P.F.Kluge

Posted on Mon, 08 Oct 2018

Biggest Elvis, P.F.Kluge-nessy. 

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Posted in "Thang Yew Ver' Much"

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yeh, Pink Lady, we've all got

Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018

yeh, Pink Lady, we've all got mobility issues, but you tell it well. 

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Posted in Mobility

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great writing harry, I'd love

Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018

great writing harry, I'd love to read your novel. I will read your novel when you're ready. 

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Posted in How writing (and a cat called Daisy) may have saved my life...

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It's great to see you writing

Posted on Tue, 02 Oct 2018

It's great to see you writing harry and you are a great writer. I reviewed your novel somewhere, possibly even here. I read a lot of posts on places like fakebook and aspiring authors always come away with the 'can I make a living from writing...

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Posted in 9 to 5

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It's been such a pleasure

Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018

It's been such a pleasure reading this post and all the supportive comments it makes me feel almost human. Brilliant. Keep at the writing Harry and shine. 

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Posted in A Martian in the Closet

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lights up a few dark holes. 

Posted on Sun, 16 Sep 2018

lights up a few dark holes. 

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Posted in Tangerine static

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yes, indeed, no confusion

Posted on Sat, 08 Sep 2018

yes, indeed, no confusion here. Only words of wisdom. mind's eye crystal clear is a bit cliched. Apart from that wonderful. 

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Posted in Feeling Confused about Time

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an awareness of other's

Posted on Sat, 01 Sep 2018

an awareness of other's plights is a kind of wisdom and the begining of healing. 

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Posted in Someone Died Today (2)

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