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I have 1154 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2137574 times and 1168 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1560 of my 15,046 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1592 votes

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supernova

‘Fuck me like you hate me.’ He did. If you lived long enough, perhaps you’d have learned to kiss sweet as candyfloss, and kept a sensible distance...
Gold cherry

old stock

Some nights when Charlie can’t sleep the past will enter his heart, a skeletal broken thing looking for home and he’ll hear the truth of his youth...
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I long for her to be Upstairs tucked in like me But not me Anybody but— – to know I’m doing OK Not mad Just be glad – When you turn off your tv...
Cherry

Huts Xish

After work my luck doesn’t change. On my way home I slide on a wet standing stones in the burn, and batter my knee off a submerged rock. I juggle...

new shoes from the Sally Army

I want I was I am Scratchin in a Sally Army that echoes like a tin can Drinkin the final day Gold star for being clean The obsession standoffish the...

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1560 of my comments have received 1592 Great Feedback votes

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some interpretations of

Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2016

some interpretations of -earth-history, I tend to agree with. What comes next? More of the same I'd guess. 

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Posted in testament: beneath the collonades

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noir always rains and grey

Posted on Wed, 12 Oct 2016

noir always rains and grey dayis n black and white in cinama pain, but here's to Gene, so long ago it seems obscene, but as you get older the frames get bolder and what stands true are the pieces of me and you. 

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Posted in It Rains in the Movies Too

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reminds me a wee bit about a

Posted on Sun, 04 Sep 2016

reminds me a wee bit about a girl that was taken to the doctors because she could never sit still. The doctor stuck some music on, and as they left the rooms, they watched her through a crack in the door. There's nothing wrong with her, 'she's a...

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Posted in The Land Where Dancing Was Forbidden

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yep, it rocks like a western

Posted on Fri, 26 Aug 2016

yep, it rocks like a western shoot-out. 

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Posted in The Crimson wake vii dark revelations

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wonderful story telling

Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016

wonderful story telling slinkygirl and really believeable narrator, or should I say narrators, because we are all more than one person, as to angels, well only the devil knows the truth of that. 

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Posted in Eighteen part one

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nice rhyme, nice time and a

Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2016

nice rhyme, nice time and a Bermondsey boy returned to his roots and you've made his wrold known. 

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Posted in BERMONDSEY BOY (LONDON)

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thanks torscott, I'm not sure

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016

thanks torscott, I'm not sure I can take any more misery. 

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Posted in Ernie at the edge of the world

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yeh, I sometimes imagine

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

yeh, I sometimes imagine places are like batteries or reservoirs, holding onto energy. 

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Posted in The Cobbe house iv Aftermath

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good luck with this ladylily.

Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2016

good luck with this ladylily. 

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Posted in Bermondsey to Basra Battlefronts.

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I'm a bit dense too seashore.

Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2016

I'm a bit dense too seashore. clumsy, a form of justification, almost a cliche, a throwway liine that comes before, Allahu Akbar and throws away lives. I've actually convinced myself that's what I meant, whiich is quite impressive for me. 

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Posted in Tribe

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