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I have 1175 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2390560 times and 1198 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1626 of my 15,427 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1656 votes

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the war to end all wars

In a world of mud, colour was a low deceit and became his eyes, his legs and his feet tapping out messages to his body in the trenches. Bright...
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granny's refrain

I disliked Mona Lisa when I saw a print of it in a library book, not for the usual childish reasons based on crappy artistic merit, or the adolescent...

grammar schools and the select-22 committee

Protect our endangered rich With the quick fix Penalise the poor Let no election promise Be a palliative or cure For elective rhetoric Take a point...

Sleeping Beauty

He kisses Sleeping Beauty The word before the fall You’ve changed and change back And I don’t change at all ‘You’re a fucking wally,’ she said ‘Not...
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the last of summer

We are in the last mouths of summer Green gods’ sad subliminal dream Dripping with sorrow No thought of tomorrow Today, today, today Is all we can...

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1626 of my comments have received 1656 Great Feedback votes

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we're all trying to get on to

Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018

we're all trying to get on to a better path. Keep writing. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)

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rainbows are majestic, but

Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018

rainbows are majestic, but you need to be looking up. You were and are. 

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)

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conspiracy theories are great

Posted on Fri, 26 Oct 2018

conspiracy theories are great for uniting people. when common sense tells you soomething you've got to look again, but the lies people tell themselves are the most insidious of all. If we turn around the popular jib we use with politicians, 'why...

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Posted in Is This True?

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anywhere is good, somewhere

Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018

anywhere is good, somewhere is better, you've taken us somewhere special. 

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Posted in Out of Season

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slipped, like an oyster, I

Posted on Wed, 24 Oct 2018

slipped, like an oyster, I like that. 

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Posted in Weep Till Forever

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captivating and carries the

Posted on Sun, 21 Oct 2018

captivating and carries the glory of the world. 

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Posted in clues

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nice one, and finished with a

Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018

nice one, and finished with a question. Did the durnk lady make the plane? Answers on a postcard. 

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Posted in First Impressions

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the inner child sometimes

Posted on Sun, 30 Sep 2018

the inner child sometimes gets lost or forgotten. we all need a little hand. 

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Posted in Inner Child

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the centre cannot hold

Posted on Sat, 13 Oct 2018

the centre cannot hold

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Posted in Here the Gyres rest

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a cat has more than nine

Posted on Thu, 11 Oct 2018

a cat has more than nine lives. I'm glad you're counting. 

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Posted in Moses, The Spider Slayer!

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