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I have 1156 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2170248 times and 1171 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Most folk called her Pet

Pet held up and out a bent strip of cardboard, which was difficult to read in the rain, ‘London,’ block capitals, in blue marker pen. The sign...
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Le Cock: My Struggle.

I’m reading ‘The International Literary Phenomenon’, Some Rain Must Fall: My Struggle, Book 5 , by Karl Ove Knausgaard. Cliché after cliché so it...
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ghosts not spirits

The pale green Audi with a ladder strapped to the roof jerks to a stop in the angled strip of road before the bus stop and the Irish Pope bursts into...

the gothic line

Dinner begins with a closed door Smell of mince and totties Worse than the dentist’s chair Shut-up and sit over there Plate piled high as a rabbit...
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shitehouse to shitehawk: a user's guide

I jot things down. Sometimes I order them later, or they order me. Usually, I don’t. That’s called the first draft. It’s full of grammatical mistakes...

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1566 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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Fathers are a strange breed.

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Fathers are a strange breed. I didn't know mine either, even though he was nominally there when my mum brought us up. I take after my father, of course. 

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Posted in Shlamek

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aye, as an old baldy, I

Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2017

aye, as an old baldy, I sympathise. No next time!

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Posted in The border of earth

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nicely done. 

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2017

nicely done. 

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Posted in 'Sourire' Haiku Set

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a trumpet for a brother, a

Posted on Sun, 26 Feb 2017

a trumpet for a brother, a trumpet for a sister, my guess is your guess, is that the broom that sweeps may, indeed, sweep us all away. 

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Posted in Brocken Spectre

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I know lots of stories about

Posted on Fri, 24 Feb 2017

I know lots of stories about drinking and drunks, some funny, some sad, some funny and sad at the same time. How do we reach honesty? That's a different story, and one which I'm not quite sure how it ends. I think you've had a good crack at here...

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Posted in A familiar through-line

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I like that Phil. All writing

Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2017

I like that Phil. All writing is the Wizard of Oz pulling the curtain away. You know that because you do it too. 

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Posted in grimms31

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if you don't know if it's

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2017

if you don't know if it's fact or fiction, then that's a good measure. Not that it matters. We're all fictional creations. Life catches us all. Death,  last and forever. 

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Posted in Dave Swakeley is Dying

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two storey. (American

Posted on Sat, 11 Feb 2017

two storey. (American spelling story). Giro? seems more British than Russian. I guess there's no hyphen in bar top. You don't need top anyway. Bar is sufficient.  There's a jump between Putin drinknig and leaving that is muddled. 'Turning on old...

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Posted in Worse Than Death

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She aimed a finger at my head

Posted on Wed, 08 Feb 2017

She aimed a finger at my head, and slowly moved it forward until it rested on the gateway of my cursed recession.  ' Descriptively, you know what you mean and I know what you mean after I read on, but maybe recession as a lead into baldness is...

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Posted in CC 108: Daniel

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cheers Elsie, I guess the

Posted on Mon, 23 Jan 2017

cheers Elsie, I guess the house is like many others in which the man is king, the wive loyal servant, told what to think and what to do. 

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Posted in grimms16

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