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I have 1176 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2438629 times and 1201 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1636 of my 15,451 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1666 votes

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the three wise men + one

I was coming back from the Dropp Inn and I met the three wise men, standing in the lane outside The Tasty Spot , at the fence, broken glass at their...
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A gift at Christmas

Years ago, when Christmas was still Christmas and I was just a wee boy stuck in my room in the attic because of the asthma, and everything else that...
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Grimms3

Pizza Face is smaller than me, but with a big square head, so we’re really the same size. We’re standing in the smirry rain with duffle coat hoods up...
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short history of time

God bless king time death ruin of all pleasure and pain The wheel turns again desire begets a friend free in a long tramp ache to the cravings fire...
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Grimms2

Dad was better fun than an alarm clock. I used to watch him before I was old enough to get locked up in school. The light in my room was on the death...
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1636 of my comments have received 1666 Great Feedback votes

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lovely story Harry. We have a

Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019

lovely story Harry. We have a cat. I say we, but it's my partners. She rescured it when it started mooching around our back and would't go away. It started with feeding her. Then a wee shelter out the back. Then a shelter in the house....well, we...

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 4) (1)

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I saw this documetary ahd she

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

I saw this documetary ahd she was indeed brilliant but troubled. Dying in the bath, well that about sums it up. And to also happen to her daughter...

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Posted in One Hundred Million Dollars.

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wiser because they need to be

Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019

wiser because they need to be. 

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Posted in One.

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you caught it, the joy of not

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

you caught it, the joy of not being joyful or in love, but moping along in Paris, hoping the city will work it's magic and make their life better. Well done. 

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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a pyramid of selves go on

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting. 

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Posted in PCT Beginning

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this is great. Charlie and

Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019

this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable. 

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Posted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)

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brialliant. Everythng is

Posted on Wed, 06 Feb 2019

brialliant. Everythng is there in front and behind the reader and Chantelle is someone we know so well, without having to look up from the screen. My only qualm is stick in a litte nudge to the reader that it's a minibus and not a car the...

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Posted in An Outing: Part One

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keep costs to a minimum,

Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019

keep costs to a minimum, drive labour costs down and the labour force to work harder and harder. Run a monopoloy that's not a monopoly. Make vast profits that are not profits. Yes. meet Amazon. Nicely done. 

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Posted in Pontius (Ch.15): Part 1

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nothing changes, steal from

Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019

nothing changes, steal from the poor to give to the rich. 2019 to 1979. Thatcher/Reagan. 

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Posted in The Husbandry Of Youth

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under the nod - great term,

Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019

under the nod - great term, sums up so much. Great story, keep moving. Storey is the British spelling for housing. You've got story, if that's American English that's fine. Otherwise, have another look. 

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Posted in The Tar Pit (1 of 9)

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