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I have 1176 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2443277 times and 1201 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1636 of my 15,454 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1666 votes

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Most folk called her Pet

Pet held up and out a bent strip of cardboard, which was difficult to read in the rain, ‘London,’ block capitals, in blue marker pen. The sign...
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Le Cock: My Struggle.

I’m reading ‘The International Literary Phenomenon’, Some Rain Must Fall: My Struggle, Book 5 , by Karl Ove Knausgaard. Cliché after cliché so it...
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ghosts not spirits

The pale green Audi with a ladder strapped to the roof jerks to a stop in the angled strip of road before the bus stop and the Irish Pope bursts into...

the gothic line

Dinner begins with a closed door Smell of mince and totties Worse than the dentist’s chair Shut-up and sit over there Plate piled high as a rabbit...
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shitehouse to shitehawk: a user's guide

I jot things down. Sometimes I order them later, or they order me. Usually, I don’t. That’s called the first draft. It’s full of grammatical mistakes...

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1636 of my comments have received 1666 Great Feedback votes

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nicely done, very visual and

Posted on Thu, 07 Dec 2017

nicely done, very visual and acoustic. 

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Posted in Peeping at the Borrowed Plumes

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Mark the might mouse is a bit

Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2018

Mark the might mouse is a bit of a spellbinder. I hope he doesn't overdo it with the catnip. 

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Posted in The Fairy Cats

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we live we die and wonder why

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

we live we die and wonder why. I don't know, but nearer the end than the begining is a trend. 

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Posted in The Search for Meaning

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yeh, shades of snow and ice

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

yeh, shades of snow and ice and all things nice, but a message too, not long for you. 

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Posted in The Snownan.

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nice eyes don't grow old they

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017

nice eyes don't grow old they just lose a bit of twinkle.

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Posted in You had such nice eyes

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where are our friends,.

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017

where are our friends,. indeed? 

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Posted in Touch Me Not

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nicely done. grown-ups are

Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2017

nicely done. grown-ups are weird. That's why I refuse to grow up. 

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Posted in Poppy

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nice rhyme for halloween is

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017

nice rhyme for halloween is ghostly time. 

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Posted in All Hallow’s Day

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I guess with hpyerbole and

Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017

I guess with hpyerbole and hyperreality sometimes we forget we're not always right. 

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Posted in Indifferent

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the sun brings its own

Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017

the sun brings its own medicine and this seems ancient and modern. The phrase, 'for wounded, beyond make mend' is slightly clumsy. I know what you mean, but simpler with 'beyond mend'. 

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Posted in Broken

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