David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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The Putin Interpretations : Neil Young Songs by Alfred N. Muggins (a big fan by the way!) Part 1
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Instead of ‘Cortez The Killer’, why not call the song ‘Putin The Killer’ :- Dancing across the Black Sea, What a killer, Bringing death to Mariupol...
Death of Queen Elizabeth II 8/9/22 The Thoughts Of Alfred N.Muggins
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9-11/9/22 Evolution not Revolution! She tried to keep her thoughts secret, To be the Diplomatic Queen, Which she always was! But anecdotes keep...
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Behind Blue Eyes : A Review and Speculation by Alfred N.Muggins
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This classic rock song by Pete Townshend of The Who could have been written for Vladimir Putin! the loneliest man on earth, the man without a...
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Magical Mystery Tour Part 5 : Mission Accomplished (Into the Liverpool Docklands!) by Alfred N.Muggins Section 2
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6/7/22 Eagerly Alfred and Mrs Muggins’ son, and their little dog ventured out of the multistorey car park into the sacred city, to be met by some...
Magical Mystery Tour Part 5 : Mission Accomplished (Into the Liverpool Docklands!) by Alfred N.Muggins Section 1
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23/2/22 Alfred and Mrs Muggins’ son, and their little dog, who they had brought all the way with them so he wouldn’t be left at home on his own, were...
I have enjoyed your poem. It
Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2020
I have enjoyed your poem. It is a great poem, expressing our desires to explore all the books and films etc in our rich culture, which we are normally too busy to explore. The sense of our society having spoiled many of its opportunities and...
Read full commentPosted in Singing in Lockdown
Interesting anecdote! You
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2020
Interesting anecdote! You were well rewarded for your caring assistance it seems. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Mary.
Great poem! You have found a
Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020
Great poem! You have found a different angle on the virus crisis. How will this distancing and isolation affect us? You have raised some interesting ideas!
Read full commentPosted in Igniting the Ignorant
Interesting dilemma, well
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2020
Interesting dilemma, well explained. Policies will vary, but in today's circumstances it does seem safer to wear a mask, for the protection of ourselves, and others. I don't have a mask myself (yet) but it does seem sensible for many situations....
Read full commentPosted in Choices.
In my opinion this is a
Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2020
In my opinion this is a really good poem about the issues, particularly the social isolation/distancing and discipline issues, brought up by the coronovirus crisis. You say so much which is really relevant, and have some interesting perspectives...
Read full commentPosted in Lockdown
Great piece! You have created
Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2019
Great piece! You have created your atmosphere of defeat or disenchantment so well.
Read full commentPosted in Friday the thirteenth
You have described the story
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
You have described the story in a very effective, easy to understand way, which I like. This story appeals to most of us modern minded people, who perhaps partly due to the teachings of Jesus, feel able to make our own choices and do not wish to...
Read full commentPosted in Let Him Who Is Without Sin Cast The First Stone.
I enjoyed this! Very readable
Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019
I enjoyed this! Very readable, and I can empathise with its humility and sense of not making too much of a difference. I like the way you create the sense of decline in the disappearing city.
Read full commentPosted in When I was a poet (After David Meltzer)
Well really if the land is
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
Well really if the land is holy ground, or church land, the police should have the power to move the travellers off. If the law is not able to be enforced then it will be made a mockery of. Hopefully there are places the travellers are allowed to...
Read full commentPosted in Two Gods.
I doubt there are anything
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
I doubt there are anything like enough policemen and women to police a firework ban. It would be quite ineffective, unless they stop the sale of them?
Read full commentPosted in Pets And Fireworks.
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