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David Kirtley
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Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 3
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(The events and feelings described here actually occurred in May 2022) 16/7/22 Winding through the streets of Marmaris in the minibus, a couple of...
Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 2
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May 2022 (Written 11/7/22) They had been picked up on that fateful morning at the allotted time, about 8.15 if he recalled correctly. This would be...
Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 1
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16/5/22 They were told this would be the tour of tours! They would wash in the sacred mud, and presumably, Alfred assumed, they would be rejuvenated...
Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 3 By Alfred N.Muggins
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17/10/22 Alfred stumbled over the meaning of ‘Growth’. There was only one way! It was up! Liz had only ever gone upwards before, even if she had had...
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Liz had dreams of living in a Tax Free World! Part 2 By Alfred N.Muggins
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14/10/22 / 17/10/22 She wanted to get us up off our backsides, and go out to do longer shifts. It sounded like a good idea. Gross domestic Product...
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A very fitting poem for the
Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021
A very fitting poem for the precarious olympic events, and the situation of the pandemic and its risk to Japan and other nations. I personally think they are right to go ahead in this restrained and hopefully safe way, but I like the way you...
Read full commentPosted in The Myth of Olympians
Hilarious! Did this really
Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021
Hilarious! Did this really happen? In a school? Very funny, and great characters. Is it based on real memories or characters?
Read full commentPosted in Steve Mason and the Music Nazi
I enjoyed your impression of
Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021
I enjoyed your impression of Stonehenge, and its significance. Very fitting!
Read full commentPosted in Estival Solstice
Great poem summarising a
Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021
Great poem summarising a scene which does seem very moving, after looking at it on your link. I may have seen it before, but had forgotten. This idea of an android with a conscience, and a memory, but nonetheless a job to do, is very powerful! He...
Read full commentPosted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)
I will definitely check the
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
I will definitely check the current self government status of Scotland prior to my next visit to Scotland! and make sure I can still trust my associates. I did enjoy this wild satirical very current political story!
Read full commentPosted in The Sure Yank Redemption
Good poem! You deal with some
Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021
Good poem! You deal with some very profound and difficult issues, and express your feelings very well.
Read full commentPosted in The Last Elephant
I enjoyed your poem. It is a
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
I enjoyed your poem. It is a good journey of the imagination, even if it is not, or never becomes real! Well imagined!
Read full commentPosted in Footsteps on Mars
I did enjoy this one
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
I did enjoy this one Marandina. Your comic satire is very up to date, and very funny. Ursula would like to be nice but has to use the methods at her disposal. Boris seems to ride through every crisis intact, but how many lives has he got left?...
Read full commentPosted in Most Vial
A fitting description of the
Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021
A fitting description of the piece and of the event. I like Stravinsky, and I always thought the Russians created a lot of the best 'classical' music! Now I have read this I must listen to the famous piece again!
Read full commentPosted in The Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913)
Most of us don't expect
Posted on Wed, 24 Mar 2021
Most of us don't expect employers to be perfect, in living up to legislations and commitments, but the kind of employers that put blame on their staff for there own shortcomings are pretty despicable. They should be publicised and their behaviour...
Read full commentPosted in Pad Life 15: Princess and the Crone
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