David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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Turkish Dancing Part 2: Coming To Terms With (Temporary!) Life In Turkey (and in particular how to manage your holiday money in a Strange Land!) by Alfred N.Muggins
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14/5/22 Alfred was becoming very seduced by the Turkish Music – even by Turkish forms of rap, hip hop and dance on the boat trip they went on the day...
The Adventures Of Vladimir Plutinplot In The Modern Age (Grim Version) by Alfred N.Muggins
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Russia’s greatest chess player (according to him!) was on a roll. His soldiers had done quite well really. They hadn’t quite achieved all their...
We Are In The ‘Empire Strikes Back’ Phase? By Mr A.N. Muggins
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5/3/22 (edited 1/4/22) Perhaps it is time to create a no fly zone over Ukraine! and a ‘no targeting of civilian buildings zone! (eventually can we...
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Turkish Dancing! Part 1: The Evening of Day 1 / The End of Chill Day! By Alfred N.Muggins
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13/5/22 The Turkish Folk Music was fantastic. The hotel entertainment group danced beautifully to it, circling hands, and footsteps. Those marvelous...
Alfred N.Muggins’ Response To Words Of Wisdom From Tolkien!
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The Dark Lord eventually returns, unfortunately in a new guise! He has been quietly building his reserves and his military for many years, waiting to restore the Dark Empire, using his slaves to kill his opponents wherever he finds them!
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I like the simple and direct
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.
Read full commentPosted in 25/11/2015
Your story is developing well
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Read full commentAlso I think it...
Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
A promising story, encourages
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...
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