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"an empty house filled with
Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021
"an empty house filled with promise awaits." I liked this very much :0)
Am dreading when my son leaves, though, "no man's land" is a brilliant phrase here, the double meaning of childhood home being no place for a man, but also the meaning...
Read full commentPosted in Leaving Home
I love how you think about
Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021
I love how you think about all the creatures :
the "crow who has no place to go" (great rhyme!),
the "gullible worms secretly wriggling" is wonderful,
"sneaky beetles prowled leisurely" exactly right!
"slugs...
Read full commentPosted in It's A Wonderful Life
brilliant, enjoyed so much
Posted on Mon, 16 Aug 2021
brilliant, enjoyed so much
Read full commentPosted in Naples: balcony overlooking Via Firenza
This is great! At first, your
Posted on Mon, 16 Aug 2021
This is great! At first, your jackals seemed to me like the foxes we have in Britain, but foxes now live in towns. So they are not the same.
I loved reading about your childhood memories of jackals :0)
Also it is very interesting to...
Read full commentPosted in Jackal, dear
I love reading them, too :0)
Posted on Sat, 14 Aug 2021
I love reading them, too :0) The goats are a great addition! And you are handling India's mourning for Packham really well?
I wish I had someone young enough to give your book to for Christmas, it will make a fabulous present for a child...
Read full commentPosted in Goat-Getting
That breakfast sounded
Posted on Tue, 10 Aug 2021
That breakfast sounded delicious! Not like any kind of breakfast I have ever had :0) I liked how you wove it all through the story, also showing how clever and capable and thoughtful Martha is to have made it?
Perfidia showed her good...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 15
Jenny, if it is about
Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021
Jenny, if it is about technology, I understand, as I am the same, BUT if it is because of your accent, please think again!
It is a wrong and terrible thing that the south east of england accent might be considered by ANYONE to...
Read full commentPosted in Fleeting Observations Of A Poet
your cousin sounds so special
Posted on Mon, 09 Aug 2021
your cousin sounds so special, a wonderful friend to have growing up. Thankyou so much for sharing this beautiful memory, you have written a gorgeous, vivid poem
Read full commentPosted in Time’s Travel
Jenny, this is a MASTERPIECE
Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021
Jenny, this is a MASTERPIECE. Too wonderful to list every highlight, just needing to read again and again.
Read full commentPosted in Fleeting Observations Of A Poet
Oh, I loved this! The rhythm
Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021
Oh, I loved this! The rhythm of Rohan and India's conversation is a delight, and how they started off is just right, I could see that happening. And then the middle bit where they got lost and Rohan was waiting for wolves to come was funny, and...
Read full commentPosted in Lotht!
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