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Pansies are amazing, I remember trying to draw one once with my new pencils and just going through the paper in the end, trying to get the depth of colour :0)
You highlight how even now purple is special, compared to ubiquitous orange...
I do like your adjectives in these, they make everything you list fun and real. I loved it when it was a fresh piece of paper, all smooth and cool with infinite possibilities of what it could become, and I got to choose, like being an...
All natural things in this one. Clever to think of sun making you brown! I bet that would appeal to a child. And not just gravy, thick gravy :0) And scuttling spiders. What great variety of emotions you evoke here!
wow, this is lovely! Particularly like your description of daffoldils as "golden, dazzling clumps" and the new lambs "dancing, exploring and urgently feeding"
I remember the lorry one, it was very funny :0) Have your whippets really caught squirrels??? My lurcher never did, but would sing/yelp/whine under trees as if his enthusiasm would make them fall out dazed. Whippets are the most beautiful...
This is amazing and brilliant, best thing I have ever read on this subject.
My son was in care for a while and we were told we might not get him back. People thought it was a consolation we might meet him when he was grown up. It is...
loved this one!
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019
loved this one!
Read full commentPosted in Joy! Joy! Joy!
Pansies are amazing, I
Posted on Fri, 29 Mar 2019
Pansies are amazing, I remember trying to draw one once with my new pencils and just going through the paper in the end, trying to get the depth of colour :0)
You highlight how even now purple is special, compared to ubiquitous orange...
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 7)
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019
"I’ve got mine and he mustn’t touch.
We don’t like each other very much.
Although we have more or less the same,
I don’t want him to join in my game."
and
"and model soldiers all ready to die.
...
Read full commentPosted in BOOM or BUNCO
I hope things are better
Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019
I hope things are better soon and you get the job in which you shine and are appreciated and paid what you deserve
Read full commentPosted in Putting Things Off
I do like your adjectives in
Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2019
I do like your adjectives in these, they make everything you list fun and real. I loved it when it was a fresh piece of paper, all smooth and cool with infinite possibilities of what it could become, and I got to choose, like being an...
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 4)
All natural things in this
Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019
All natural things in this one. Clever to think of sun making you brown! I bet that would appeal to a child. And not just gravy, thick gravy :0) And scuttling spiders. What great variety of emotions you evoke here!
Read full commentPosted in Kids' Colours 3)
wow, this is lovely!
Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019
wow, this is lovely! Particularly like your description of daffoldils as "golden, dazzling clumps" and the new lambs "dancing, exploring and urgently feeding"
It is wonderfully full of life all through
Read full commentPosted in Wild daffodils of field and meadow*
That's beautiful!
Posted on Sat, 16 Mar 2019
That's beautiful!
You have time as well as space in here, both your time there and future when the crops have grown. And the way the last line opens up is wonderful
Read full commentPosted in On Pippin’s Hill
I remember the lorry one, it
Posted on Wed, 13 Mar 2019
I remember the lorry one, it was very funny :0) Have your whippets really caught squirrels??? My lurcher never did, but would sing/yelp/whine under trees as if his enthusiasm would make them fall out dazed. Whippets are the most beautiful...
Read full commentPosted in He said I was Whippety (Rimus Dissolutas)
This is amazing and brilliant
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
This is amazing and brilliant, best thing I have ever read on this subject.
My son was in care for a while and we were told we might not get him back. People thought it was a consolation we might meet him when he was grown up. It is...
Read full commentPosted in Roots
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