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I like this even more today,
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020
I like this even more today, it does describe exactly how I feel in our woods! It is WONDERFUL!!!
It is the sort of one where everey time another bit stands out today - "Sap of poems" :0)
Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All the details about clothes and also the fizzy drinks are great. I would not have thought of them, but they make the reader instantly aware how weird and changed everything is. I do hope this is a long story!
As I iron so rarely it is very stressful and concentrated so not sure if your poem is an accurate reflection on normal ironing. However it is BRILLIANT description of washing machine noise, I love how it goes round and round like my thoughts...
I like this exchange very much! Abigail is getting much more self confident, too. Cleaning wounds and cooking supper. That she is worried about Buck because he is old reinforces that she is little, just having to grow up very fast. "All quick" I...
I like this even more today,
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020
I like this even more today, it does describe exactly how I feel in our woods! It is WONDERFUL!!!
It is the sort of one where everey time another bit stands out today - "Sap of poems" :0)
Read full commentPosted in Wind in Trees by Water
Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020
Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All the details about clothes and also the fizzy drinks are great. I would not have thought of them, but they make the reader instantly aware how weird and changed everything is. I do hope this is a long story!
Read full commentPosted in "Past or Present" Chapter 3
Have only read this once but
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020
Have only read this once but know I will come back lots of times!
Agree utterly with it all, this bit is what hit me most :
"you are not judged to be anything
other than a part of it,"
I love this about Nature, too. No...
Read full commentPosted in Wind in Trees by Water
what an imagination you have!
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020
what an imagination you have!
Read full commentPosted in "Past and Present" Chapter 2
I like "apologies of bees"
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020
I like "apologies of bees" too! They look like kingfishers do you think?
Read full commentPosted in Bee eaters
I had missed this so very
Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2020
I had missed this so very glad it is poem of the month. It is lovely and made me want to cry
Read full commentPosted in Iriecat
As I iron so
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020
As I iron so rarely it is very stressful and concentrated so not sure if your poem is an accurate reflection on normal ironing. However it is BRILLIANT description of washing machine noise, I love how it goes round and round like my thoughts...
Read full commentPosted in Ironing, a woman's half hour
I like having moth in mothers
Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2020
I like having moth in mothers, so the tree is part moth, that's clever
and "moon-felted" like the moon feels them as well as being soft as felt
and "ink of feathers" because it is so fragile
and I had bever heard "instar" so...
Read full commentPosted in Puss Moths
I like this exchange very
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
I like this exchange very much! Abigail is getting much more self confident, too. Cleaning wounds and cooking supper. That she is worried about Buck because he is old reinforces that she is little, just having to grow up very fast. "All quick" I...
Read full commentPosted in Pins (6)
Posted on Mon, 29 Jun 2020
Uncomfortaby is my typo!!!!! Couldn't get the cut and paste bit to work. So sorry to send you looking.
You must be boggling predictive text with this wonderful language! I imagine a fuse going somewhere with stuff like "felt his...
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