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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 462196 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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That final stanza would be

Posted on Thu, 23 Aug 2018

That final stanza would be horrific for someone who didn't pronounce the H smiley

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Posted in Casino Town

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I love those two final lines 

Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018

I love those two final lines 

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Posted in highland games 2018 (again)

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I like the voice in this poem

Posted on Thu, 02 Aug 2018

I like the voice in this poem - it's almost like one of those make your own ending books for children too

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Posted in A Puzzle

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Beautifully done, with the

Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018

Beautifully done, with the funeral framing the story. As Stephen and Mark have already said, it's the honesty which brings power to this piece. Well done Drew

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Posted in Those Moments

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Bithika, I'm one of the co

Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018

Bithika, I'm one of the co-directors of ABCTales. I am so very sorry to hear such sad news. John was an absolute legend on our website - the depth and breadth of his writing was amazing and he has many admirers all of whom will be so sad to hear...

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Posted in Stomach Cancer

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Wow - you've got a lot going

Posted on Sat, 21 Jul 2018

Wow - you've got a lot going on in this short piece! Some well crafted characters (though you've killed most of them by the end) and a good sense of time and place. What is a colonial gait? 

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Posted in Holt: The Andalan Affair Chapter one (wip)

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a bit of editing needed at

Posted on Sun, 15 Jul 2018

a bit of editing needed at the start - I think you've copied and pasted a passage twice

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Posted in Suggestion Box Problems

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Nice twist at the end!

Posted on Thu, 12 Jul 2018

Nice twist at the end!

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Posted in The End of Marianne Brownleaf’s Teaching Career

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This would make a great

Posted on Wed, 04 Jul 2018

This would make a great little animation pepsoid

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Posted in Pah

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A poignant and well written

Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018

A poignant and well written reflection - thank you

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Posted in Remnants

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