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That final stanza would be
Posted on Thu, 23 Aug 2018
That final stanza would be horrific for someone who didn't pronounce the H
Beautifully done, with the funeral framing the story. As Stephen and Mark have already said, it's the honesty which brings power to this piece. Well done Drew
Bithika, I'm one of the co-directors of ABCTales. I am so very sorry to hear such sad news. John was an absolute legend on our website - the depth and breadth of his writing was amazing and he has many admirers all of whom will be so sad to hear...
Wow - you've got a lot going on in this short piece! Some well crafted characters (though you've killed most of them by the end) and a good sense of time and place. What is a colonial gait?
That final stanza would be
Posted on Thu, 23 Aug 2018
That final stanza would be horrific for someone who didn't pronounce the H
Read full commentPosted in Casino Town
I love those two final lines
Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018
I love those two final lines
Read full commentPosted in highland games 2018 (again)
I like the voice in this poem
Posted on Thu, 02 Aug 2018
I like the voice in this poem - it's almost like one of those make your own ending books for children too
Read full commentPosted in A Puzzle
Beautifully done, with the
Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018
Beautifully done, with the funeral framing the story. As Stephen and Mark have already said, it's the honesty which brings power to this piece. Well done Drew
Read full commentPosted in Those Moments
Bithika, I'm one of the co
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
Bithika, I'm one of the co-directors of ABCTales. I am so very sorry to hear such sad news. John was an absolute legend on our website - the depth and breadth of his writing was amazing and he has many admirers all of whom will be so sad to hear...
Read full commentPosted in Stomach Cancer
Wow - you've got a lot going
Posted on Sat, 21 Jul 2018
Wow - you've got a lot going on in this short piece! Some well crafted characters (though you've killed most of them by the end) and a good sense of time and place. What is a colonial gait?
Read full commentPosted in Holt: The Andalan Affair Chapter one (wip)
a bit of editing needed at
Posted on Sun, 15 Jul 2018
a bit of editing needed at the start - I think you've copied and pasted a passage twice
Read full commentPosted in Suggestion Box Problems
Nice twist at the end!
Posted on Thu, 12 Jul 2018
Nice twist at the end!
Read full commentPosted in The End of Marianne Brownleaf’s Teaching Career
This would make a great
Posted on Wed, 04 Jul 2018
This would make a great little animation pepsoid
Read full commentPosted in Pah
A poignant and well written
Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018
A poignant and well written reflection - thank you
Read full commentPosted in Remnants
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