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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 462196 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Mark's right - this is a

Posted on Sun, 28 Oct 2018

Mark's right - this is a great standalone piece. Wonderful way to end on a rainbow!

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (short extract 3)

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For the sticky tapes try the

Posted on Sat, 27 Oct 2018

For the sticky tapes try the very cheap shops - the pound ones. Or I bet Ebay or Amazon have them. I wouldn't go looking for bodies in the attic either (even bird bodies!). Good luck anyway - I hope you get some peace soon

edit: Amazon...

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Posted in The Swarm

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Hilary, you poor thing! You

Posted on Sat, 27 Oct 2018

Hilary, you poor thing! You have really brought to life the horror of fly infestations. It happened to me once and it was absolutely horrible - actually had me in tears. We tried everything - all those electronic devices, swats - I wouldn't use...

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Nice to see you back writing

Posted on Thu, 25 Oct 2018

Nice to see you back writing again Penny. I like this IP response - especially the little details like not knowing what a scrunchie is called (not sure if you use the same word as here?)

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Posted in "Would she notice?"

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clever! I like the strut.

Posted on Tue, 16 Oct 2018

clever! I like the strut. When you do the next draft, this bit reads a little too much like a wikipedia entry:

“Nigeria is a vast country and made up of several provinces. There has always been conflict between Christians and Muslims...

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Posted in Monroe (5)

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I recognise that cat from her

Posted on Sat, 06 Oct 2018

I recognise that cat from her many photos on Facebook Harry! Very glad to read this story of consequences-with-a-happy-ending

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Posted in How writing (and a cat called Daisy) may have saved my life...

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A very thoughtful and well

Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018

A very thoughtful and well considered account Harry. I've just left a link to this on Di_Hard's piece and suggested she read it. It seems both of you are at seperate ends of the same decision:

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Posted in A Martian in the Closet

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This is our Poem of the Week

Posted on Sun, 16 Sep 2018

This is our Poem of the Week - Congratulations!

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Posted in Tangerine static

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I'd never heard the word

Posted on Mon, 10 Sep 2018

I'd never heard the word 'sough' before and had to look it up - can't understand why it's not more widely used! Anyway - this is lovely Di, welcome back!

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Posted in storm cooking

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Such a bleak, sad piece. 

Posted on Mon, 10 Sep 2018

Such a bleak, sad piece. 

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Posted in Not That Kind of Girl

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