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I love the way this veers off
Posted on Thu, 28 Jun 2018
I love the way this veers off into the surreal!
Read full commentPosted in The End of the Evening
This trips so beautifully off
Posted on Mon, 25 Jun 2018
This trips so beautifully off the tongue Rhiannon - it's a wonderful response to the IP, thank you for posting it!
Read full commentPosted in Brightness without burning
I like the tree comment! In
Posted on Sat, 23 Jun 2018
I like the tree comment! In my mind it's exactly the kind of thing a child would say
Read full commentPosted in In your shoes
The childlike, chatty tone of
Posted on Sat, 23 Jun 2018
The childlike, chatty tone of those questions adds greatly to the chill of this piece and gives it a bigger impact. This is a good one Di!
Read full commentPosted in In your shoes
This is our Facebook and
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
Please share/retweet if you like it too
ps: lavadis, I think it's malleable
Read full commentPosted in I have an imaginary daughter
This is quite spectacularly
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
This is quite spectacularly surreal in a very good way - thank you for posting it
One thing: did you mean mailable or is that a typo?
Read full commentPosted in I have an imaginary daughter
I have to say I agree with
Posted on Mon, 18 Jun 2018
I have to say I agree with Scorpio on this - it is a brilliant idea, and the action is nicely balanced from start to finish. Very much worth fleshing out the characters, and perhaps adding some dialogue. It could result in something really...
Read full commentPosted in BAIT
There's some nice observation
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
There's some nice observation in this, and the dialogue is well spaced out and believable. I really wish I could say that the plot so far is rubbish, and that no adult would behave in such a way - but instead I just felt very angry after reading...
Read full commentPosted in Choose One Cake Only
The passing on of things - it
Posted on Thu, 07 Jun 2018
The passing on of things - it's a rite of passage, and simply and beautifully expressed here.
Read full commentPosted in Here Are Things
I have never heard of wind
Posted on Mon, 28 May 2018
I have never heard of wind turbines (?) referred to as rumplestiltskins before. They look so graceful and other-worldly for a distance, don't they? Some wonderful imagery in this poem Di
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