Jane Hyphen
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)
Alistair nodded. ‘Yes, she does get muddled sometimes.’ ‘Anyway, you made the right decision, we’re very professional here. So this is something you’...
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Mole
I heard his voice in the rushing water. Graham and I used to sing a song together. I can’t remember how it started but this was the late eighties and...
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If I can just get through the day
If I can just get through the day Knowing I can return to the vessel Where oblivion is docked And I can retreat into silent, Solitary tunnels, my...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 10
Cece checked the time and rolled her eyes, it was almost time to return to work. The large bedroom window overlooked their back garden and she paused...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 9
Wednesday was a late night opening at the clinic, for professionals who were too important to take time out from their working day. Cece usually...
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Reminds me of the sky I saw
Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022
Reminds me of the sky I saw earlier, low rolling clouds, dark against the blue. I get the sense of something foreboding, it could be too late for a cure but we can only be optimistic. I really enjoyed the last verse, 'or maybe I'm a feathered...
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The word wicked, derived from
Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022
The word wicked, derived from Wiccan. I can't see anything too wicked here from June, except sacrificing a chicken, something KFC do on a gargantuan scale daily.
I enjoyed reading Paul because it's well-written, very unique and I wanted...
Read full commentPosted in Charmed (Part Two of Two)
Excellent descriptions of the
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Excellent descriptions of the tube, I can almost taste it. Looking forward to part two and what will become of June. Great Barr, I know it too well and Perry Barr too...
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We are like sponges,
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
We are like sponges, constantly soaking it all in. It always amazes me how much very young children learn in their first years but as you've said here, we never stop developing and learning from experience of the world around us and others.
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No-one get's double time
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
No-one gets double time anymore do they, more like half-time and make sure you get in done in half the time too.
This part of the story is creepy, please don't cut it short because creepy isn't easy to convey. There is something both...
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 42
I don't want them to get
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
I don't want them to get caught but what a burden this is to have a dead body to get rid of. I can see why Uggly Puggly is down, he's the only capable person, but capable of anything.
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This is very striking in its
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
This is very striking in its truth and somewhat depressing too. There is something really peculiar going on whereby we are constantly being informed about the destruction of the environment while being encouraged to partake in the overconsumption...
Read full commentPosted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights
I found this to be really
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
I found this to be really quiet, soothing even. Those violets are truly sweet and you've honoured them beautifully here Jenny.
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I just read the three parts
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
I just read the three parts Paul and I I found this depressing tale to be quite believable in a Dr Who ish sort of way. I love the ending where you brought back the cob horses and it's written so well, I couldn't wait to read the next part. Not...
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)
That was a very interesting
Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022
That was a very interesting read. How lovely that your mum and auntie were so close and supported each other and were able to live out their retirement in a sunny place. Sorry for your loss. It was insightful to read about the all the stages of...
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