Jane Hyphen
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Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Cece Hughes Cece Hughes was what you might refer to as well preserved. At a distance she could have passed for somebody half her age, even close up...
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You learn about the sunshine
First you learn about the sunshine Long, blue sky days Beneath the boughs of trees Leaves flickering, lambent The sun is ever loyal It burns in...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 7
'Is everything okay?' ‘Yes,’ he nodded, ‘I just had a…..dream that’s all.’ ‘By the way Solo has been sick in the night, there’s bright yellow bile on...
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The Clappers
When it comes to school productions, there is usually a mixture of emotions; pride, embarrassment, pressure, discomfort, excitement and then there’s...
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You Looked Like You Had Lost
At low tide, the stillest sleep, and the vastness of this beach exposed. Memories littered, stories, half buried. I think that’s when I saw your eyes...
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I really want to visit, haven
Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2022
I really want to visit, haven't got around to it yet but it's one of my dream destinations. Love 'brawny landscape' and the way you describe the dawn and the ripples on the loch. Wish I was there now.
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Moving without being
Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022
Moving without being sentimental. Anniversaries are often poignant simply because the natural elements of the day bring it all back. I'm often unaware of the anniversary date of my father's death but there is something about the weather,...
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So pretty Jenny. Once you've
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
So pretty Jenny. Once you've got them, you've got them. The seedpods are as lovely as the flowers and the feathery green foliage is light enough to complement the blooms 'purity laced'. They are a piece of art and always refreshing to see them...
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No but I'm going to start and
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
No but I'm going to start and it will be full blown hysteria.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)
Brilliant again. Appalling,
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
Brilliant again. Appalling, mundane, absurd, funny, horrifying and wonderfully written.
Read full commentPosted in Alabaster Conjugal 3.
I've always that thought that
Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022
I've always that thought that the skeleton of a dead tree adds so much to the landscape and I like that you've paid tribute to it here with your wonderful Rhiannon. The contrast of the tree standing still among all the life and movement of the...
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I love the element of
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
I love the element of folklore in this; nature intertwined with adventure, constant peril, all driven by the froces which spring from childhood experiences. The name Elowen is so beautiful.
Read full commentPosted in Leaving The Nest
I think that story about
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
I think that story about marriage was in the Daily Mail. All I can say is that I've been with my partner for over thrity years, we have two children, we're not married and our children have had a very stable family life, no splits or affairs,...
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You've made so many valid
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
You've made so many valid points here Di. Some are pushing nuclear energy as if it's a risk-free, magic bullet to the energy crisis.
Nuclear is not clean, the risks and long term effects are frightening. We all need to stop being so greedy...
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I like this poem, it speaks
Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022
I like this poem, it speaks of the coiled spring like energy that lives inside all horses, along with the need to be both loved and led. I particularly love the last line.
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