Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for You..Part 18
Spencer was staring intently out of the kitchen window, moving his head to focus on the treetops and then back down to the lawn. ‘Three blackbirds,’...
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Productivity is Dead
Productivity is dead We should slow the hell down And enjoy being alive instead Bill Gates talking about AI The white collar workforce shrinking away...
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We Watched from the Shore
We watched from the shore, is he really on board? There’s no sign of him on land or sea or yet behind this sealed sky. He is behind our eyes, as a...
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Parcel for you..Part 17
Vanessa breathed a huge sigh of relief as Pat and Stu pulled away and disappeared down the street. Charlie trotted up to the front door and leaned...
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Parcel for you..Part 16
Spencer pulled away from Pat and began putting the finishing touches to the table. ‘It’s nearly ready to eat,’ he said flatly. ‘Good. Please sit down...
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Magical I agree and fitting
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Magical I agree and fitting to its land of origin. I would love to visit, the gardens alone look wonderful. The idea of a Moon Maiden is more inspiring than the man on the moon or the idea of it being made of cheese.....
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Hi Paul. Some people are born
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Hi Paul. Some people are born terrifying and they simply hone this gift as they grow up. Vanessa doesn't stand a chance especially now that the daughter is travelling and has the worldly upper hand. Thank you for reading.
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There is something divine and
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
There is something divine and otherworldly about Miss Russell that comes through in your words and somehow fits with the clean yellow daffodils of spring and perhaps death itself. I agree with Insert, this is on a higher plane.
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There is something divine and
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
There is something divine and otherworldly about Miss Russell that comes through in your words and somehow fits with the clean yellow daffodils of spring and perhaps death itself. I agree with Insert, this is on another level of perfection.
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I'd love to know more about
Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024
I'd love to know more about Rose. People who go rogue in the workplace are always a talking point even though we never speak of Rose.
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Thank you Insert. I suppose
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
Thank you Insert. I suppose technically, anyone who has been married before is recycled. I think Annie will be laying it on thick....
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Thank you lenchenelf I could
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
Thank you lenchenelf
I could picture the armpit hair in my mind's eye but...
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An abundant poem Jenny.
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
An abundant poem Jenny. Nothing can hold nature back, especially at this time of year, the sense of expectancy is everywhere, bursting buds and busy birds. Very apt for mother's day weekend.
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How unsettling, an innocent
Posted on Fri, 08 Mar 2024
How unsettling, an innocent trip to the pub and so many question marks. 'just looking for a man', made me laugh. I really felt as if I was back in York while reading this, you captured the magic of the place, the anceint buildings, cosy but...
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York is ghost heavy isn't it,
Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024
York is ghost heavy isn't it, you can almost feel them brush against you as you walk around the city. The cryptic message, can it really be from the blonde shopaholic wife? I think I've said this before but your writing has a real unmistakable...
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