monodemo

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I have 440 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 226909 times and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes

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Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

Gold cherry

The Home

Sometimes hard things have to be done!

New year's rant

My new year’s resolution isn’t your typical one. I don’t want to say I’m going to give up something, because that never works. No, my resolution...
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My greatest fear!

Seven I’ve lost This time of year! My sister absent For her I fear! Receive a text Her saying goodbye? Her struggles real I know she tries! Look at...

May 4th (chapter 6)

Does David pop the question so early?

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36 of my comments have received 37 Great Feedback votes

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OMG

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

well what a poem! that truly deserves the cherry. 

i really enjoyed it and the story was told so well. 

honestly, a great piece of work

well done

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Posted in The Fox Hunt

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nice one

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

i liked this poem. it was short and to the point. also i liked the use of the word thunder.

well done

 

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Posted in Impressions

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nice one

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

wow, what a great poem!

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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nice one

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

i liked this poem richard, i liked it because it was easy to read and the ending was sweet!

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Posted in If Only

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thank you

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

thank you for you great feed back. i will surely work on all of those points.

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Posted in the zoo

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