monodemo
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I have 447 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 316339 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
1347
In her mind she’s trapped by thought Of the stories where she fought Giant spiders with big green eyes ‘They’re the windows to the soul’ she cries...
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Suicide
For someone to feel such heartache and shame To take their own life because of the pain They feel that theres no longer light in the tunnel the...
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- 448 reads
the words just came out of my mouth
Every girl is pretty in their own way Even if they happen to be gay When the words just came out of my mouth I expected people to scream and to shout...
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- 851 reads
My Max
Goodbye my darling, my precious, my all. You helped me throughout my fall In health and looked at me in awe With those big eyes and that brown paw...
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anti depressants
I take these two orange pills every night They dull out the pain the struggle and fight They numb my senses until I feel Nothing that this world...
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- 2209 reads