monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 256561 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Ghosted
Scars on my legs and arms I own Deep enough that some were sown Back together pound of flesh Clean my act I started fresh Slow and steady wins the...
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- 400 reads
Catfish
Is this the girl to whom I’ve been talking? She seems real but she could be stalking People on the internet and be a catfish To hear your voice would...
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- 1009 reads
fairytales brought up to date
Unfortunately she was brutally rejected By the first person to which she felt connected She was given hopes and promised her dreams Of London and...
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- 723 reads
1347
In her mind she’s trapped by thought Of the stories where she fought Giant spiders with big green eyes ‘They’re the windows to the soul’ she cries...
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- 398 reads
Suicide
For someone to feel such heartache and shame To take their own life because of the pain They feel that theres no longer light in the tunnel the...
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- 402 reads