Naomi Abdull
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I have 13 stories published in
one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 11325 times
and 2 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 22 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote
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My friend
It was the red lips that drew my eyes as she mouthed thank you to the cashier. I drew a breath as my heart sank into my stomach. Her smile was as...
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White Lillies
SHAWNA The office was quieter now that the hiring was over and the job nearly finished. Sure there were other contracts, but for the Door 2 Door...
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Make a wish
I could feel the sun peering in through the window. It hurt to open my eyes so I kept them closed. I couldn’t do it for long though. The sun was...
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Please tick a box
I always knew what I wanted to do when I was younger. I wanted to be writer. I wanted to create imaginary worlds that people would picture in their...
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Life through a lens
All it took was the sound of the key entering the lock of the door and I was up on my feet and running. I would see his face fill with glee and when...
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I really like this piece. You
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2014
I really like this piece. You paint a real and vivid picture of the hatred of the patient next door and how the mind wonders when given the time to think. I especially like the last paragraph when he is pulled back into reality.
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