Ray Schaufeld
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I have 110 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 304340 times
and 77 of my stories have been cherry picked.
181 of my 2,144 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 182 votes
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My stories
Shlamek
Written some years ago by my father Abraham Schaufeld
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Mum, when?
A twisted tale of love and politics
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Anne and Martin
'Anne, where are you off to tonight?' 'I'll not be long, Marie.' ' She's out a lot these days.' She's always busy, always happy.' Marie returned...
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Spring
Spring marches in Daffodils shine, rising like saints To the strong slow pulse Of the pale foggy sun. Sap rises, Life surprises Our budding, opening...
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A Cancelled Passport
'You're wearing a suit and tie!' Mr Peter Francis Lockyer. Place of birth Exeter. Occupation student - scored out - new occupation travel broker. 'I...
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It's different and I can
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016
It's different and I can understand what you are saying. Why did you choose this colour for the man?
Read full commentPosted in subjected/ subjugated
I like this a lot. 'I
Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016
I like this a lot. 'I scribble on,' the paper being the perfect companion. The last verse with its sharp ending is quite deep 'when I wasn't looking it stopped to rain.' and that's when the writer grows up ...
Read full commentPosted in Pure Inspiration
Freedom! Yes, that's what we
Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016
Freedom! Yes, that's what we need. Also love peace and equality. I like your poem.
Read full commentPosted in Colour Blind
Great description Rhiannon.
Posted on Wed, 30 Nov 2016
Great description Rhiannon. Scratchy is a good word.
Read full commentPosted in Frost and Sun
As always, good writing which
Posted on Fri, 25 Nov 2016
As always, good writing which illustrates the present, moves the story on efficiently and ends on the 'what next' cliffhanger. Like the car window writing. Give us the next episode please, I know CM and i are impatiently waiting.
BTW Sean...
Read full commentPosted in CC 73: Answers from the Hill
Good description of Mitchell
Posted on Mon, 21 Nov 2016
Good description of Mitchell House. Dialogue moves the story forward fluently. Who isss the ssscribbling ssssserpent? Emer?
Read full commentPosted in CC 70: Serpents, Ultimately
'You are sorry as always'. I
Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015
'You are sorry as always'. I left 2 relationships when the good times ran out, both times in the early stages of pregnancy. I also volunteered ar the Stirling refuge while expecting my elder daughter. Yes, the 'sorry' can be heartfelt. But it's...
Read full commentPosted in Happy families
Yes! I want to be there.
Posted on Fri, 11 Nov 2016
Yes! I want to be there.
Read full commentPosted in Bright November Late Afternoon
Visual and informative,
Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016
Visual and informative, Rhiannon. I love the colours.
Read full commentPosted in Autumn Colours (i)
King Harald Hardrada
Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016
King Harald Hardrada
Was like Harold Godwinson only harder
Not content with the rule of Norway alone
He made unsuccessful attempts on the Danish and English throne.
(Clerihews are fun, aren't they...
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