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I haven't been out to look
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
I haven't been out to look this year, but at others, found so many of the 'Mother's Day cards' in the shops seemed to be artificial, and not realisitic for many of the ups and downs of family life.
My mother is no longer alive, and in...
Read full commentPosted in Happy Mother's Day
Your writing is always very
Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020
Your writing is always very concentrated, and bubbling, I think, with metaphors, of which I'm probably not catching all! But I read this as hoarding a hope inside that you protect from attack, but aren't too sure you could really explain??...
Read full commentPosted in Jar of Lights
It sounds a lovely haunt to
Posted on Sun, 26 Jan 2020
It sounds a lovely haunt to revisit anyway, weather good or bad ( though beware of cliffs when the weather is bad!)
I remember in Snowdonia my youngest son (who had Asperghers) running on some rocks with glee and his slightly older brother...
Read full commentPosted in Memory and sacred places
I was interested to read your
Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2019
I was interested to read your last couple of lines that seem to indicate how easily one can hide away inside oneself to loss for others and oneself.
When researching family history often there is a just a skeleton list of names and places...
Read full commentPosted in Graveyards
You really made me realise
Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2019
You really made me realise why all my family have loved cycling. I missed the boat somewhere when growing up and never got there until on a tandem briefly. The pleasure and refreshment of fresh air at a slight speed really comes across here –...
Read full commentPosted in Riverine reflection
I had read this and wanted to
Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019
I had read this and wanted to wait and understand more clearly when there were comments. But what I found powerful were the phrases 'A stinging lock In time tattered, her voice speaks frayed words', but especially that last phrase....
Read full commentPosted in Dark Rooms
I like the title! There are
Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019
I like the title! There are always those unasked questions! And simple tasks and smells bring back memories and persons so keenly. In Welsh we would say that my grandmoher used 'the notion of the eye not the hand' I think, in measuring her flour...
Read full commentPosted in Toss in a pinch of love
I like this very much, too. I
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
I like this very much, too. I remember the word 'phototropism' from biology experiments on plants growing towards the light, but hadn't though of 'heliotropism' indicating turning towards the sun. And so I hadn't realised that is where the name...
Read full commentPosted in Heliotropism
Very credible situation with
Posted on Wed, 14 Mar 2018
Very credible situation with his Dad. Interesting how it comes out here the real concern his mother does have for him, and his awareness of that, though their communication together is difficult. In some ways his special phobias/worries seem to...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)
Thought-provoking, Jean, and
Posted on Fri, 12 Feb 2016
Thought-provoking, Jean, and I can empathize with much that is on your mind. As a family, when I was growing up we didn't kiss, hug, or say 'I love you' much, but I think we were at ease with each other and had a warmth of expression in greeting...
Read full commentPosted in I Hate the Word Love
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