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Very credible situation with
Posted on Wed, 14 Mar 2018
Very credible situation with his Dad. Interesting how it comes out here the real concern his mother does have for him, and his awareness of that, though their communication together is difficult. In some ways his special phobias/worries seem to...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)
Thought-provoking, Jean, and
Posted on Fri, 12 Feb 2016
Thought-provoking, Jean, and I can empathize with much that is on your mind. As a family, when I was growing up we didn't kiss, hug, or say 'I love you' much, but I think we were at ease with each other and had a warmth of expression in greeting...
Read full commentPosted in I Hate the Word Love
You do seem to be able to
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
You do seem to be able to describe his thinking very naturally, and his observations, looking into the water, noticing the small life, and drifting into imaginations.
Read full commentThen suddenly the tensions, mirrored a bit by his grandad's tensions. It...
Posted in Jake Mutant - Chapter Four
Welcome, you are new here,
Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015
Welcome, you are new here, aren't you? You've drawn out an interesting and tender theme here.
I liked the thoughtfulness of 'As the passion that they share Crescendos with great care.'
Personally I would have liked a...
Read full commentPosted in The Embrace
This reminded me of when my
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...
Read full commentPosted in The Discovered Unartist
Trying to see where you're
Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014
Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment, but just like the prophecies concerning his first...
Read full commentPosted in Broken Faith
Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
Read full commentPosted in Shadow Cooking
Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
Read full commentPosted in No Ties (IP)
Seems from the photos that
Posted on Wed, 02 Apr 2025
Seems from the photos that you had some very good weather - especially in the very interestting ones that seemed to be of New Mills. Not somewhere I knew anything about but the mills and river walks and bridges looked special. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Hot Cross Buns and Fish and Chips
I too liked the phrase,
Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025
I too liked the phrase, Sufficient soaking for trees and flowers and, as she said, it is rather onomatopoetic. Had to look up the spelling of that! But meant that it seems to sound a bit like the rain gently soaking in.
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