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I have 1919 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3035167 times and 573 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1389 of my 12,510 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1430 votes

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The wonder and responsibility of speech

The idols are silent – God speaks… We’re made so we language can use… the ‘Why’ of the universe, and can chat so our friends understand!

Up Periscope!

Smiling wide it peeped over the wall …
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Cherry

Garden bindweed, again

Insidiously quickly it binds, spirallingly winds entangling. strangling, entwining around grasping support from the stronger stems; poking through,...
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Grace with power to save

Persecutor Saul of Tarsus living by God’s laws, but 'blind', with contempt for claims of Jesus … Once John Newton was rebellious … Drunkard, worked on slaveships, callous …
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Begonia …

Floating ballroom dresses …
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1389 of my comments have received 1430 Great Feedback votes

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He's reluctant to open the

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

He's reluctant to open the message, but then to open the link. That latter is what is dangerous, isn't it (as I've often been told!). So there's no danger to opening the message? Did he? And then hover over whether to click on the link, because...

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Posted in Ghostbot (Part One of Two)

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Sensitive telling Seems to

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2024

Sensitive telling Seems to have an echo of the parable of the Lost Sheep. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Year with the Brighouse Stars Walking Club (December)

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One of our grandsons has just

Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024

One of our grandsons has just started a year in Budapest postgrad and has been astonished at the heat, but his eczema is much better in it. Rhiannon

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Posted in For the Love of Irma Ogden

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I was helping with 'help for

Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024

I was helping with 'help for families with difficulties with young children' at a time when Asperghers started to get mentioned in meetings of helpers. And I kept thinking as aspects of it were mentioned, 'Oh, that sounds like my youngest son's...

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - Respite

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So many memories there to be

Posted on Wed, 28 Aug 2024

So many memories there to be touched and remembered together and talked of, and still the delight of doing so together whatever ups and downs they had gone through together down the many years. Rhiannon

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Posted in What happened when Grandpa gave Grandma a miniature doll’s hardware shop on their 55th year anniversary

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It certainly had a shape and

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024

It certainly had a shape and completeness though stirring the thoughts of 'could it have been otherwise' and 'what brought it all about'. I think what was most shocking, but realistic, was the confession that he had deliberately provoked their...

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Posted in Epilogue: The Lost Manuscript

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It is a real problem! My

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024

It is a real problem! My frustration is that parents are so often talking to their young children while looking at their phone. Children need eye-contact and the feeling of undivided attention and interest. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Martian Sends a Postcard Home 2024

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I seem to have missed this

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024

I seem to have missed this before. You always write smoothly. I still think that the intrigue of claimed mysterious sightings, whether trickery, imagination or real are a distraction from investigating the mysteries of life whose sollutions have...

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Posted in Tom Crean

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What a lovely description of

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024

What a lovely description of your place of relaxation! Rhiannon

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Posted in Musings Among Flowering Bushes

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Thanks. Maybe they had it

Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024

Thanks. Maybe they had it coming, but we mustn't shut them off from the possiblitiy of repentance and reformation. Being found out is sometimes a blessing, as our children come to realise!

The reference to the parable of the Pharisee and...

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Posted in Not just the specks in their eyes*

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