Starfish Girl

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Soul Searching

A story I do want to continue! Black rocks adorned with a filigree of white, lacy foam. Rocks churned up from the bowels of the earth. If they could...

Who's Afraid?

My writing class was given the task of writing metafiction, not sure if this is it! You know and I know we all have to do whatever we can to keep...
Cherry

Red

Haven't submitted anything for ages. This a writing class exercise for setting a scene. The door was locked and bolted. Dark red, velvet curtains...

The Day

The sun rose, gradually lighting the sky, another day. The sparrows argued and shouted in the guttering, the blackbird had already announced the...
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A Bed of Wilted Spinach

Oven on, apron tied securely, all ingredients correctly laid out. In the kitchen, her domain. She looked around approvingly. The marble topped...

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115 of my comments have received 122 Great Feedback votes

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I do like the way Effie has

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2022

I do like the way Effie has become a 'person' with moods, likes dislikes and preferences.Much like her 'mum' I imagine.

Keep smiling and making us smile Jean

Lindyx

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Posted in Chemo 12

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Hi Jean

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Hi Jean

Thanks for keeping us in the loop.

Mouth ulcers are awful I remember as a child having them frequently. That stuff you can buy from the chemist is not nice but does work. Although my dentist is very nice I do put off going...

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Posted in chemo 11

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Hi Jean

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

Hi Jean

I love the way your writing is 'warts and all'! You write things as they are, both good and bad. But you always end on a positive note.

I think we've all been there with the food business, can't be bothered and cut corners...

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Posted in Chemo 10

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Hi Jean

Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022

Hi Jean

What an upleasant experience for you (and Effie). A well written, amusing and informative piece, as usual. You do seem to overcome the trials and tribulations of your condition with great equanimity.

RESPECT!

Lindyx

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Posted in Chemo 9

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Hi Jean

Posted on Tue, 06 Sep 2022

Hi Jean

Your descriptions of what is happening to you are always 'so human'. By that I mean you show pleasure at small things, humour at large things and a great interest in what is happening to you with a desire to share and also, if you...

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Posted in Chemo 8

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Hi Angus

Posted on Sat, 03 Sep 2022

Hi Angus

A wonderful description of these lovely, intelligent creatures. You can almost undestand why ancient people feared them. I think that they are such great birds.

Lindy

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Posted in Knowing The Crows

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Hi Jean

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

Hi Jean

Another lovely 'little epistle'. Effie does sound like a troublesome little child at times. Glad you managed to settle her down allowing you both much needed sleep.

You are still sounding very up beat, well done!

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Posted in Chemo 7

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Hi Jean

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022

Hi Jean

Thanks for the update.

Glad you managed to sort out your worries re the stoma nurse. It seems much of the NHS seems to be farmed out to private companies. My neighbour had a cataract op on the NHS at a private hospital. She...

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Posted in Chemo 6

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Hi Jean

Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022

Hi Jean

Still keeping me smiling, in spite of. Loved your description of Effie's singing. My writing class teacher has a stoma as a result of a ruptured bowel a couple of years ago. Very nasty at the time but now she is fine and is coping...

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Posted in chemo 4

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Hi Jean

Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022

Hi Jean

In spite of the seriousness of your case you have still the ability to make me smile. Like the formatting, it seemed to be a planned approach.

Lots of information here that many of us knew little about.

Pleased that...

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Posted in Chemo 3

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