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Revenge is a dish best served cold

Lucy sat in one of the leather armchairs, sinking into its depths, and savoured the rich, earthy taste of the espresso. She nibbled at the biscotti...
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Tom's Secret

A story I started a while back that needs continuing, I think! Tom was in the kitchen. On tiptoes with hands resting on the sink he was just able to...
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Swan Song

Swan Song The mirror was cracked and smeary. Some of the lights around its edge flickered as though trying to send some sort of Morse Code message...
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The Spa

The Spa I blame him. Why didn't he see? Surely there were enough clues. At first, in the beginning, we were so close. Soul mates! What a ridiculous...
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The End of the Pier

No, no! You sit there. I’ve got everything ready. Tea ok for you? Earl Grey with lemon? I could make coffee if you prefer? Tea is so English isn’t it...

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115 of my comments have received 122 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Jean

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023

Hi Jean

You explain things so well with not a hint of self pity. You are certainly going through the mill but as you say the lesion on the brain was found early so hopefully it can be dealt with quickly. Your poor treatment at the hospital...

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Posted in Bitty Barby Boob RIP part 2

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Tina, beautiful.

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015

Tina, beautiful.

So many great lines and images.

I think you make her live a little for us readers as well. What a lovely tribute.

Lindy

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Posted in Quietus

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So well written 'stitched

Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014

So well written 'stitched together with sand bags' what a great line.

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Posted in Flood

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What a touching and moving

Posted on Fri, 11 Oct 2024

What a touching and moving account of your last day out with 'mum'. What strikes me is the pleasure she took in her new 'experiences' even though some she had experienced before,many times. Each day presenting something to enjoy.

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Posted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - A day out

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So sorry to hear that you are

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

So sorry to hear that you are ailing. My husband often quotes his granny who said "Don't grow old" but the alternative is much worse!

I had an MRI scan a while ago, didn't get music to listen to. I thought the sounds were like listening to...

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Posted in Can Life Get Better?

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Hi Rhiannon

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024

Hi Rhiannon

Lovely poem and description.

I love begonias and mine seem to have done pretty well this year, especially a pale pink, peachyone. Ballroom dresses is such an apt choice of words.

Lindy

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Posted in Begonia …

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You sum up a child's logic

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

You sum up a child's logic and knowledge so well. Beautifully done.

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Posted in Making Potions

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I am enjoying your

Posted on Wed, 26 Jun 2024

I am enjoying your 'travelogue' Maxine. Love your comments about places you visit.

Went to Malta some years ago and stayed in Valleta, as you say a lovely island.

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Posted in Malta. Part Five.

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A lovely, scenic and calming

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024

A lovely, scenic and calming country walk (in spite of the mud). Last year we spent a week in Dorstone, not far from Peterchurch. A truely delightful part of the world and so well portrayed by your words.

Thanks for the reminder of our...

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Posted in Above Peterchurch, east of the Black Mountains

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So atmospheric and

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2024

So atmospheric and picturesque. Each detail is so easily seen.

Lindy

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Posted in Is this the real life?

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