Miss Takes Again

By The Chosen One

Tue, 20 May 2008
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When your head feels cloudy and confused,
You must sum up your feelings,
Put everything into perspective,
Remember the things you enjoyed,
The natural highs,
Touching her thighs,
Walking through the woods at night,
Never losing sight of reality,
People confuse you with science, politics, two thousand and twelve ways to mistake you.
Imagine yourself as an envelope, it's what you put inside you, which you eventually send.

Relax and have a good day.

Certificate 15
Other
Journey To The Future
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
'two thousand and twelve ways to mistake you. Imagine yourself as an envelope, it's what you put inside you, which you eventually send.' I like these lines - the number 2012, just great! And the envelope metaphor. I think if you reworked this and remove the last, extraneous line, it would be great!