Its Broken

By indigogold

Fri, 22 Aug 2008
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3 comments
 

It feels like frostbite,
Across my heart,
I want some answers,
I just don't know where to start,
My emotions are all over the place,
I start to cry,
everytime I see your face,

How could you do this?
You've torn me in two,
Part of me wants to run away,
The other wants to see you,
You looked so innocent,
Your big blue eyes,
Little did I know,
They were full of suprise.

Each tear,
Stands for my love,
Thats the feeling I most fear,
You've ripped me apart,
Little did I know,
You'd break my heart.

By Emma x

Certificate 12
My Books.
Love

Comments

Submitted by animan on
I think this is a lovely poem - and that the recipient of it should feel very much in awe of it and of the feeling it conveys. I often feel that the lover is the more special than the loved - they have that ability to love and to express their love, whereas the loved just sits and acts as object and can't find the courage to be the in-harmony subject as well - what do you think?

 

Submitted by tamara on
Tamara This Is beautiful,heartfelt and real,well done.x

Submitted by indigogold on
Thank you for commenting on my poem ... don't laugh at me Im not childish but Im twelve remember age is just a number !