The Last Time I Saw You

By Bradene
Sat, 04 Oct 2008
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4 comments
Gaunt, was always
the word that fitted you best
even the first time I saw you.
It suited you,
added a mysterious air
to your devil may care
demeanor.
Tall and slim
to the point of scrag end, I used to joke,
That was when
we were still in love,
could still laugh at each other’s silliness.
Gaunt, was still
how I saw you that last time.
By then, you were
staring from liver diseased eyes,
grinning with cigarette stained teeth,
smelling of decay and cheap whiskey.
There was no longer any mystery
yet the devil remained…
Uncaring.
©
Copyright
VMM
2008
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Comments
Nice,I like the simplicity
Permalink Submitted by tamara on
Nice,I like the simplicity of your work yet still ever powerful for me.
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Just popped by to say many
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Just popped by to say many congrats, dear Val on a well-deserved cherry:-)
Tina x
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